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The Mistake
(#) XXPoeticTragedyXX 2007-09-10
Wow, Gwen. I just spent like 4 hours catching up on your story and I must say I'm more than impressed! Your writing absolutely astounding, and I think you capture Patrick just perfectly!
You had from the word your typed!
Amazing!!
I was literally jumping in my seat, just going crazy wondering what was going to happen next.
This chapter was perfect just like the rest. That one greasy dude was utterly creepy and I love the way you describe things!
Fucking Gold.
Seriously, you put my writing to shame!!
Anyways, now I have to wait like the rest, but it will be totally worth it!!
Update soon, pretty, pretty please?
-The Mistake
(#) XXPoeticTragedyXX 2007-09-10
Wow, Gwen. I just spent like 4 hours catching up on your story and I must say I'm more than impressed! Your writing absolutely astounding, and I think you capture Patrick just perfectly!
You had from the word your typed!
Amazing!!
I was literally jumping in my seat, just going crazy wondering what was going to happen next.
This chapter was perfect just like the rest. That one greasy dude was utterly creepy and I love the way you describe things!
Fucking Gold.
Seriously, you put my writing to shame!!
Anyways, now I have to wait like the rest, but it will be totally worth it!!
Update soon, pretty, pretty please?
-The Mistake
(#) XXPoeticTragedyXX 2007-09-10
Wow, Gwen. I just spent like 4 hours catching up on your story and I must say I'm more than impressed! Your writing absolutely astounding, and I think you capture Patrick just perfectly!
You had me from the first word your typed!
Amazing!!
I was literally jumping in my seat, just going crazy wondering what was going to happen next.
This chapter was perfect just like the rest. That one greasy dude was utterly creepy and I love the way you describe things!
Fucking Gold.
Seriously, you put my writing to shame!!
Anyways, now I have to wait like the rest, but it will be totally worth it!!
Update soon, pretty, pretty please?
-The Mistake
(#) rejected_smurf_god 2007-10-17
uh, anymore new stuff? Cause i will set patrick on you if you don't!
-Peter-The Mistake
(#) tradition44 2008-01-27
i love it. but she seems a litle self centered. will she ever help patrick with his problems? solve a fight between him and pete or sumthin. dunno. Keep up the good work and update soon!The Mistake
(#) fancy_kidx 2008-06-06
in all honesty, this is my favorite story on this site.
so you should probably update it soon, even though you haven't in a long time [:
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