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Life Support
6 reviewsONE SHOT! Patrick is left to watch the love of his life walk off and marry another. Whats a boy to do? Whats a boy to say?
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Life Support
(#) GwenMerlon 2007-06-01
Yay!!! I finally get to review- NOT thanks to anything having to do with Ficwad, that's for sure.
I love Gracie!!! And what are you doing with my emotions here??? Really? She's not in love with Joe! Patrick is the one who is amazing! And he came to her wedding- dressed all in black. Sigh. He was so adorable. The word vomit needed to continue. And this better NOT be the end Rindi dearest! There BETTER be another chapter in the works here or else I will seriously drive all the way to Ohio. Oh, don't think that I won't. My threat is good.
Anyway, it was full of sweetness and I wish there was a rating point that represented my feelings in a more accurate light. So I think I'm gonna stick with Ambiance. I would go on and on some more but I think I already did that in our lovely little online chat a couple hours ago.
Anyway, I loved it! It was amazingly spectacular. Love and miss you babe!Author's response
I would just love to say I love the movie Mean Girls because of their "word vomits" LOL
I hate to tell you my dear friend..but it is the end..hence the reason why I have it as a one shot. I hate to do that..lol but I must..haha I love Gracie and Joe and Patrick, but I just can't see them beyond the confines of one chapter LOL
although I would love to add a happy ending to it..because you despise them with a passion..maybe there will be a version2..haha idk I haven't decided yet.
I heart you and miss you too..and your rating point was perfect!!!Life Support
(#) ssketchator 2007-06-01
I loved this. It was so brilliantly done, it wasn't overly descriptive or emotional. I especially liked that when it came down to it, he wouldn't ruin her big day, he wouldn't tell her how much he loved her, he wouldn't tell her she was making the wrong choice. I absolutely adored that. This is excellent.Author's response
lol it was soo hard not to have him say "Don't marry her marry me!" Kinda thing, but I knew it had to be done that way. It just had to. I'm glad you understand it. I heart you review!Life Support
(#) punkypromqueen 2007-06-01
Did you hear that?
Yeah, that was my heart breakng and i'm sure even the little eskimo scientists in Antartica could hear it shattering.
I'm in cardiac arrest over here.
it's was so good, amazing job really - and are you sure sure that this is only a one shot?
Cause i totally think that your brain is sending my brain little telepatic messages informing me that you know, it's longer than a one shot.
Either way you rock just as much as this non one shot did.
lol.
xxoAuthor's response
OMG ALEX! LOLOLOLOLOLOLOL at the eskimo scientists in Anatartica!!!! I want to go there now..and pet them or something.
I love telepathic powers, I wish my signal was strong enough to say I don't know how I could continue this on. I love the characters, but I can't see it. Send me a visual my friend and it maybe able to happen LOL
and you rock so much harder my dear friend.Life Support
(#) ryanrossISsove 2007-06-01
oh my goodness, that was amazing. soo sad, like make-me-want-to-vomit-and-then-cry sad.
haha, wow. i urge you to write moreAuthor's response
Aw I'm glad I got you to feel emotions, although I don't think vomit was a really good one LOL. But I'm very glad you liked it thank you!Life Support
(#) ryanrossISsove 2007-06-01
oh my goodness, that was amazing. soo sad, like make-me-want-to-vomit-and-then-cry sad.
haha, wow. i urge you to write more
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