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We're Both On Borderline Obsession
(#) Life_is_42 2007-06-01
"Yeah, we should. I don't know where Ryan would go anyways, since we carpooled here together," Jon said in a confused manner before getting up with a groan. His leg had fallen asleep while he was sitting on the couch.
well i think you know why i like this moment, luv.
:D
"Here we go." Sarah let out an exhausted sigh, as she parked her car near Brendon's trailer. She watched Brendon sit still in his chair. A moment passed. "Oh, right." Brendon murmured, and opened the car door, ready to get out. Sarah touched his shoulder. Brendon turned in his chair.
"Just hang on, okay?" She smiled, and half-hugged Brendon. Brendon felt numb to her touch, felt numb to everything in the world. He couldn't feel a sensation in his body. He couldn't feel his stomach growl when he was hungry. He couldn't hear his mind telling him to FUNCTION.
I really love this moment because 1) most importantly we see Brendon's break down without alice. he needs her. it's adorable.
2) we see a softer side of Sarah that we do not always get to see. :D it's awesome.
it's perfect.
you rock my world.
you're my author idol.
and coincidentally my best friend.
life's great when it works out like that.
love,
The LizWe're Both On Borderline Obsession
(#) Geets 2007-06-02
ok, damn bloody brilliant chapter, m'dear! lmao. I thought i already sort of did the memorable quotes... except its more moments, lol. and its the same now, haha:
i liked the ending, in general. and I agree with Life is 42 about the bit with Brendon and Sarah in the car - that was a bit of everything: funny, sweet, kinda dramatic. lol.
oh, and I liked the scene with Brendon, and, whats her name?... oh, thats right, Geets (lmao, im sad :P excuse me). when Brendon didnt learn his lines, and then...
"The sad part was that he only had 9 lines, whereas Geets had 21 lines to memorize.
I'm losing it. I'm really losing it."
that was good, and funny, lol
I cannot wait for another update! I wanna know WHERE THE HELL Alice is, and WHEN SHES COMING BACK! lolWe're Both On Borderline Obsession
(#) Geets 2007-06-02
oh, and, tiny thing - herdle is spelt hurdle :P sorry, thought id correct u. unless u meant to spell it like that, in which case, im an idiot...We're Both On Borderline Obsession
(#) KatieLove 2007-06-07
"Brendon felt numb to her touch, felt numb to everything in the world. He couldn't feel a sensation in his body. He couldn't feel his stomach growl when he was hungry. He couldn't hear his mind telling him to FUNCTION."
This is definitely one of my favorite quotes. It's completely truthful too. Everyone feels like that at least once, and it seems to happen to me a little too often.
The chapter was great as usual.
I love the story and it's author. :-)We're Both On Borderline Obsession
(#) ezel 2007-06-15
ok, no! this was so- i mean, you cant leave me like that! your end is always sooo mean... i need to know what happened to alice!! oh and pooor brenny... i feel so sorry for him! :(
well, keep on writin, hon!We're Both On Borderline Obsession
(#) peterpandacomplex 2007-06-16
"I didn't know either, but...Maybe we should call Derek and tell him Brendon took a bad fall, and-" Spencer was cut off abruptly, though, by Sarah again.
"Are you kidding me? TELL him that he fell?" Sarah seemed agitated by all of this.
I loved this quote Spencer obviously doesn't know Derek well enough.
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