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What happens when a pleasant evening goes wrong? (Short story, so just give me three minutes of your life, and read it.)
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The First Date Is Always a Bit of a Free Fall...
(#) xxpatdxx 2007-11-21
I was like this EXACTLY
looks at screen sighs pleasently when sunset is mentioned rolls eyes at the girl's constant chattering Falls for the boy immediately because of you saying Mr. Hottie haha Laughs when he says "trust me" is shocked when he shoves her off still in shock when she is falling Laughs ass off as soon as last paragraph starts story ends and I review Now? I am typing thisThe First Date Is Always a Bit of a Free Fall...
(#) bindie611 2007-12-08
I get the shivers when someone trusts someone else and is betrayed. Even if it's not too serious. Good writing, but.Author's response
But? But? But what?
Be specific. I wrote this for English class, for my end-of-the-year portfolio last year, and My teacher loved it.
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