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New Eyes
20 reviewsThe Final Battle is over. Harry has left Britain, leaving a devastated magical community, a lost Hermione, and a blinded Luna. Hermione becomes Professor McGonagall's apprentice while she cares f...
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Brother Z
(#) BJH 2007-06-04
Am I still the first review for this one? I guess I'll find out.
Nice chapter, you've set the stage for Snape to not only see the errors of his past but also begin to see a possible future.
You've also put Z in the position where Harry can be reunited with Hermione and Luna. But how much of all this does McGonagall know?
BJHAuthor's response
McGonagall knows the outline of Z's story (she wouldn't have hired him blind). She will know the trio are becoming close.
"T"Brother Z
(#) NAPPA 2007-06-04
You REALLLLY should put these fics as a backup on your yahoo group. FicWad goes down a lot.
Anyway. I really loved this chapter. I'm a little confused in the middle of the story. Part of me thinks Harry is Brother Z, then, thinks not with little abarant things. Mostly however, I am loving the fic :)Author's response
It does, doesn't? Of course, the story is (very very slowly) being posted on Astronomy Tower as well (they have three chapters).
"T"Brother Z
(#) DavidMPotter 2007-06-04
Wow, thanks for sharing anther wonderful chapter. I love that their relationship is growing.Brother Z
(#) Meteoricshipyards 2007-06-04
Still think that Z is Harry. Was thinking about the letter "z" the top, left to right line - going forward in time; the diagonal - going back in time; the bottom left to right line - going forward again.
Still enjoying the story. Thanks for sharing it.
Tom A.Brother Z
(#) Anaknisatanas 2007-06-04
lovely update. I particularly enjoyed Z's little chat with Snape. I'm also pleased that Luna agreed to go ahead and get the ritual for her news eyes done sooner rather than latter. I look forward to seeing where this story continues to develop.Brother Z
(#) Shaggy37 2007-06-04
Outstanding chapter!!!! I can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter. I still have this feeling that Brother Z is Harry but I guess I will wait and see what happens when he reveals who and what he really is after the secrecy spells and oaths wont I? Do keep up the outstanding work and update soon please:):):):)
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