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The battle of Hogwarts ends, now the wizarding world must pick up the pieces
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The Afterlife and Times of Myrtle Potter
(#) Cateagle 2007-06-08
Wraps up? Not hardly, there's a fair bit to go, IMHO. I suspect Myrtle is using Hermione's body at the moment and that the hovering dementor is finding that Hermione's soul is rather more determined and stubborn than most. I suspect Myrtle and Hermione may have to, at least first, establish a sharing arrangement and then later, perhaps arrange a full merger of equals between them.Author's response
Thank you, as always, for reading and reviewing. This is one where Harry is a one-girl guy, the girl might be a little schizoid . . .The Afterlife and Times of Myrtle Potter
(#) DrT 2007-06-09
Interesting elven twist. I look forward to the conclusion.
"T"Author's response
Thanks, as always, for reading and reviewing. There's at least one more elf angle to play here as well, stay tuned . . .The Afterlife and Times of Myrtle Potter
(#) Great_Writer_Sarah 2007-06-11
Y'know, just when I think the fandom has gone to hell, I get to reading your story, and humanity is restored. Finally! A fanfic about Myrtle, one of the most misused characters in the entire HP lexicon! I loved the little turns and twists in the story - from Ginny being a DE, to Neville finally getting his, to the uprising of the house elves against Voldemort. Brilliant!
Forgive me for being bold, but as a recent graduate from my Advance Placement Literature class, my newly-formed nitpicker eye could not help but spot some punctuation errors in some of the sentences. I don't suppose you're in the market for a beta reader? Haa! I guess I'm just pointing this out so I can have the privilege of reading new chapters early! XD
Anyways, I'm totally digging this story. Now that the big battle to end all wizarding battles has closed, I'm anxious to see what happens next. Especially interested by the lone Dementor floating around. I guess I'll just read your 39-chapter fic while I wait for an update, eh? Cheers, and happy writing! -GWSAuthor's response
Thank you for reading and reviewing, and thank you very much for your kind words of encouragement. I have had people (who shall remain unnamed) offer to beta my work, but then didn't. If you would like to see the next three or four or five chapters in their raw form send me an e-mail at my contact address PerfesserN at hotmail dot com. Hope you enjoy "Family Issue" as well, rumor has it it's a good one.The Afterlife and Times of Myrtle Potter
(#) Rocky235 2007-07-01
The battle scene, the elf story, Neville's Raiders, holy cow! This was as good as any story I've seen.
Outstanding!Author's response
Thank you, more on the elves to come lots of sub plots to, well, plot out. . .
N!The Afterlife and Times of Myrtle Potter
(#) Wonderbee31 2008-10-25
Looks like what's going to be a nice twist here, and enjoyed what looks like to be a cool start to the next arc here. Little Amanda looks to be a sweet character here, and looking forward to what role she plays later on.
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