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It All Started With A Concert...
(#) pyrotechnicist 2007-09-02
ok,
well i just read them all
coz i was bored as and trying to avoid doin my biol assignment
here goes- theyre ok
not great but theyre pretty good
a few of the chapters are WAY too short and nothing happens in them
also try and make the plot line a lil more realistic...
im just trying to give pointers
hope u realise its constructive critiscism im not trying to b mean...
lol keep it up darl it'll get there
xoxoAuthor's response
hahaha.... yea i realised that... my friend said the same..
that was my first fic and i understand you lol
but thanks for letting me know...
i cant even b bothered with that fic so i'm gonna delete it anyway lol
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(#) gerardlover17 2007-09-07
Ok....you need to continue. at first it was just ok then it got better you need to finish this off...got it.Author's response
you serious?
well i already finished that story... ok if ya want it then i'll update it then
thanks lolIt All Started With A Concert...
(#) gerardlover17 2007-09-07
Ok....you need to continue. at first it was just ok then it got better you need to finish this off...got it.It All Started With A Concert...
(#) gerardlover17 2007-09-07
Ok....you need to continue. at first it was just ok then it got better you need to finish this off...got it.It All Started With A Concert...
(#) xXi_luv_gerardXx 2008-07-29
omg i need to know the rest!!!!!!
UPDATE PLEASSSSE hahaAuthor's response
reallly?
awww....
ages lol
i'll see what i can do...
thanks
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(#) ZimmyMCR 2009-07-28
Elmo!! Sorry I didn't read this at first, I haven't been on here in about 9 months :/
but I love this story!! Keep it up girly! :)
Author's response
Hahahahaha
Yea you told me (:
Are you for shizzle?
This story sucks babe lol
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