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you can keep my brother
(#) jerseygirlxx 2007-06-15
Wow this was pretty intense. I hope people arent afraid to review it!
Even though it was about her father, I think it tells more about her relationship with her mother. It makes alot of what happened in the beginning make more sense. You shouldve put this in earlier!
Im still waiting for the fall-out with Billy you know! Dont think youre gonna skip by that one! ----xoxoAuthor's response
i couldn't write this earlier..don't know why, i just couldn't. lol i just posted the billy talk chapter, hope it won't dissapoint you since i know you were waiting for it.you can keep my brother
(#) bekk1992 2007-06-15
It was good to find out why her dad hasn't been around.
Thanks for clearing that up.
It also explains a lot more of her self loathing.
I'm really enjoying this.
Can't wait for more.
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oh i'm really pleased you liked it!. i probably should have written it earlier but i couldn't..but i think it fits into the story well.
just posted another chapter, hope you'll like it as wellyou can keep my brother
(#) punkpenguin 2007-06-19
i love this chapter it rockedAuthor's response
yay! :))you can keep my brother
(#) rocker4lifeSAM 2007-06-21
i wonder who the random guys kids are. this was a good chapter. =DAuthor's response
thank you soo much for reviewing!!!you can keep my brother
(#) musicaldreamer 2007-07-09
This is really good!! More soon pwease!!Author's response
thank you! happy you liked it!
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