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Playing With Padfoot
7 reviewsWhen a little girl sprays a certain Black dog with a hose by accident, it sets off a chain of events that lets a lonely dog know just whats really important in life. I loved writing this story!
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Playing With Padfoot
(#) twilliams1797 2007-06-21
I don't even have a dog and I think its great.. please do more!Playing With Padfoot
(#) Beregond5 2007-07-12
That was absolutely adorable! I could really see that happening in the books too. Extra kudos for an original idea. :)
The only thing that seemed kinda off was the format: I'd prefer it if the paragraphs were a bit more clearly separated. It might makes things easier for the other readers.
Keep writing. :)
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