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Only a Real Love
15 reviewsTime is just a man-made measurement. Time changes everything. What you are always affects who you are. Sometimes you lose the most important things because of them. Short Patrick Story.
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Empty house not heart
(#) fobgal1 2007-06-17
Amazing.
I'm so happy they are together again.
I don't want it to end.
Could you maybe think about a sequel?
You are an amazing writer.
Hope you decide to write a new story soon.Author's response
Your review gave me butterflies. Almost instantly I had a review and I was dumbfounded and just amazed. hank you It was very hard for me to end it too, trust me. It kind of hurts that it is over but.. i felt it had to get done. I don't liked my stories to be too long. A sequel? I'm not sure. That I will have to think about and play with ideas. I am not saying No though. Anyway... I will try to come up with a new story soon. Just keep an eye out for me... hopefully ficwad gets back on track and its easier to keep up with things. Thank you soo much for reviewing and supporting me.Empty house not heart
(#) xharlequingirl 2007-06-17
aw my best friend!! i had the utmost faith in you and this story. Your writing is absolutely breath taking and I tell you this all of the time. Color by numbers!! I'm telling you that everyone will absolutely love this ending. I don't know what else to say because I've told you how amazing you are and I can not wait for your next story. You are one of the best, if not the best ever. Love you. ♥Author's response
I am no where near being one of the best writers. Nuh uh. There are SOOO many problems with my stories.. but I am not going to put that out here. You hear my complaining all the time. Thank you though. You know you are the inspiration I have, the person I come to for everything. I do hope everyone likes the ending.. i dont need ficwad to revolt because I ended the story. haHa. I love how you are already pulling for another story.Haha. I'll see what my brain comes up with.. you know i have the wierdest inspiration for crap lmao.Empty house not heart
(#) xharlequingirl 2007-06-17
aw my best friend!! i had the utmost faith in you and this story. Your writing is absolutely breath taking and I tell you this all of the time. Color by numbers!! I'm telling you that everyone will absolutely love this ending. I don't know what else to say because I've told you how amazing you are and I can not wait for your next story. You are one of the best, if not the best ever. Love you. ♥Empty house not heart
(#) xharlequingirl 2007-06-17
aw my best friend!! i had the utmost faith in you and this story. Your writing is absolutely breath taking and I tell you this all of the time. Color by numbers!! I'm telling you that everyone will absolutely love this ending. I don't know what else to say because I've told you how amazing you are and I can not wait for your next story. You are one of the best, if not the best ever. Love you. ♥Empty house not heart
(#) patricksgirl84 2007-06-17
Loved the ending. Sad to see it end. You are definitely on my my fave authors. Keep it up!!!Empty house not heart
(#) newyorkeyes 2007-06-17
NOOO!
YESSSS!
I'm so glad they're back together. I'm so glad that they both figured out they were meant to be.
I'm sad that this is over because you are such an amazing author, but I know you'll be back again.
You have a passion for this, I can tell.
Great job.Empty house not heart
(#) whatkatydid 2007-06-18
Oh my, that was truly wonderful. I love happy endings, especially ones where there is so much closure in such a subtle way.
I'm so happy for them, I really felt it, I was willing them to get back together with each word that I read and seeing it unfold in the last chapter was beautiful....Empty house not heart
(#) ssketchator 2007-06-24
I was not expecting that.
But! It was incredible. It was Moving, the Ambiance was perfect, this plotline has been Original from the get-go. Yeah, that's right.
Back to the real review: This really moved me. Her emotion was so real and so open that I almost cried. For real. I am so happy to see them back together; this whole story I've been wondering how you would end it, if Patrick would be able to get over this, or if they'd find their way back to one another. And I'm so glad it ended like it did. Bittersweet is great, but happy endings are always the best.
Write more stuff. Lots more. Right now.Empty house not heart
(#) kitkatpwl 2008-02-27
wow...im sooooo sorry that i caught this so late!!!!! totally bummed.
this was an AMAZING story!!!! you write exceptionally well and i loved every single chapter! im sad that its over but i was really happy with the ending. great great job!!
cheers
kat
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