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Triple trickery
4 reviewsPete's ignorance of Kirsh's suspects is killing him, so he resorts to foul play. Moe comes home from Italy and raises hell.
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Her better half
(#) moocow 2007-06-25
PETER CAN'T GET A BONER!!!
HA!
ok. i'm done.Author's response
:pHer better half
(#) ryanrossISsove 2007-06-25
i fucking love it. i fucking love it.
you are pete wentz, aren't you?
totally kidding.Author's response
Yes. No. Yes... ah, I don't know... ;)
Thanks for your kind (then again you called me Pete...) words.Her better half
(#) whatkatydid 2007-06-28
For some reason, I thought this was one of your best chapters, I think it was the clever pulling together of some character flaws and some more dteial into the plot ( i.e it ending??)
I loved it.Author's response
Wow. Thank you. Actually I wanted to have it out the day before yesterday (Wednesday) already but I just had too much work for school this week. And then yesterday (the day after Wednesday) I was really determined to update so I forced myself to finish the chappie... while watching some stupid program about a model trying to make a "freak" look/ behave normal on TV. So I was thinking "this can't turn out that good" (both the chapter and the TV show). So thanks for your praise. :)
This story is a field-trip of character flaws, it's asexual to write! ;)Her better half
(#) LOVELA 2007-06-30
Peter Peter Pumpkin Eater is going to get himself into trouble...
I enjoyed this chapter and I think Moe is a little bit of an overreacter!?Author's response
Yeah. She seems a bit of a... I dunno, psycho? ;)
Thanks for catching up and all the reviews, Smoocherella! :)
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