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Moving In, Moving Up, Moving On
(#) punkypromqueen 2007-06-26
So yes, much better than the 8 letter version - lol.
Aw pregnant hormonal people make my life, as well as suprise cribs and home buying and this whole chapter.
ah i love this story so much.
:D
xxo
p.s. first review finally! yay!Moving In, Moving Up, Moving On
(#) lonerstreet 2007-06-26
Oh my god love this chapter. Cant wait for the next one please update soon.Moving In, Moving Up, Moving On
(#) miss_pretty 2007-06-26
aw, i want Patrick to father my babies !!! yell
luv it!!Moving In, Moving Up, Moving On
(#) hips-n-hearts86 2007-06-26
LOL...I am soo in love with your characters. They are just to cute for words...I heart them... I can't wait for the next chapter!!!!
LOL at the whale comment.Moving In, Moving Up, Moving On
(#) LOVELA 2007-06-26
I totally got Joe Ass. Thanks!
I love how hormonal Petra is. She's crying, she's pissed, she's crying, she's pissed. I LOVE IT! And Patrick is there doing damge control. It's completely adorable. I do love this couple. They are wonderful and they make me smile!! You make me smile!
Smooches darling!Moving In, Moving Up, Moving On
(#) danceislife 2007-06-26
ooo he's in big. I loveeee this story! I had a dream about it actually. Weird...Moving In, Moving Up, Moving On
(#) halleluiakid 2007-06-26
"you" uh-oh someone is in trouble.
loving it!!Moving In, Moving Up, Moving On
(#) FrostedGlass 2007-06-26
Oh, I loved it. Poor Petra's emotionas are all over the place. And Poor Petra's body is as well... ha ha haaaaa...
My favs:
"I do? Wow." Patrick said, making a cute face at this obvious revelation. -> AHA! A biased narrator! ;)
/"You think I can just let you in without a pass-"
"-I'm Patrick Stump's Wife!"
"Yeah - and so are the other 25 girls in this queue." He said abruptly. Petra stared up at him./ -> How authentic. clapsMoving In, Moving Up, Moving On
(#) riaryder 2007-07-02
She better kick his damn ass for that.
I would be scared if I was him. Hormonal, pissed off woman = trouble.
I love how you write her emotions. Her complete inability to control them is just so true to life.
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