- omg... wow. that was amazing, dude. you do NOT know how sad i am right now!!! I'll tell you - I'M REALLY, REALLY SAD! I can't believe it's finished!!!! what am i supposed to do now?!?
but, at least the whole story has been bloody brilliant, and the end was no exception!! That song had nice lyrics... they were relevant because... Brendon wants to be alone with Raquel and so going to space would enable him to do that? And she makes him really happy? Does that make sense?!...
So fantastically written, dear. Brendon was so cute when singing, and then the docter, and the pregnancy, and i was like "WOW"! He was all understanding, and she was all worried, and I just LOVED IT!!!
Congratulations, dude, seriously, this truly is the best story I have read. Without a doubt. And I can only hope that you will write more stories like it! Except not "like it", if you know what I mean :P WELL DONE!! gives everything sweet I can give you Geets xx
Author's responseI don't think I've ever "aww"'d that much in my whole life. Thank you! I'm totally blushing right now. See, people like you are the reason I even write. And to think that I wasn't going to even post it! But don't be sad! We all know it had to end eventually... Oh, and about the song. You are correct. But there's a specific line that pertains to one of my chapters. ("I'll hold you close, if you're afraid of heights.") I actually didn't catch that until after I re-read the finished chapter. XD And I can only hope that I continue to write stories (not) like this. If you get what I mean. Thank you so so much. takes treats :DDD
(#) prissynblack 2007-06-26B-R-I-L-L-I-A-N-T
I can not believe its over. This was such a good story and it had me hooked the whole way. It was along wait but well worth it in the end. Why in the hell would you stop it when we find out shes pregnant? I think I feel a sequel coming onXD I have to say the song you picked was so perfect. I have that song on my computer so I had to play it while i was reading that part. Your such an awesome writer and this is one of my favorite stories by far. I can not wait to read some more of your works!
Pwease start a story soon!!!!!!
Author's responseThank you!!!! And to answer your question... I felt that if I didn't end it now, it never would. But this way if I ever do decide to continue I have a great starting point. ;) Yes, Stellar is a great song. My roommate got me into it. Haha. Hopefully, I'll do new story soon. Can't keep you waiting TOO long, now can I?
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