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(#) charmschool 2007-06-28
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“Happy birthday” came excitedly from Leon. “Thanks” came tiredly from cloud after a long night with Leon. “You don’t seem very excited” said Leon. “It’s just that something has been on my mind.”
“What cloud?”
“Leon, how come we only fuck on special occasions. Is it that you have not come to terms with being gay and you don’t want to seem like it. Or you just don’t love me. Sometimes I feel like you don’t want anything to do with me anymore:
“No cloud that’s not it. I never realized that you felt left out of my life”
“Well I do”
“I still love you:
“Prove it”
“How?”
“Go up stairs and take your clothes off”
5 minutes later
“oh Leon fuck me fuck me harder oh god, oh god, oh god.” screamed cloud
“Do you believe I love you know cloud?
“Oh yes how could I ever-“ said Cloud
“Let me smack that ass” said Leon
“You are the best guy fucker ever” said cloud
“I am the only guy you ever fucked” said Leon
Cloud ignored that and proceeded to suck Leon’s dick
5 hours later
Leon flopped down on top of cloud with semen and sweat everywhere.
“Do you finally believe I love you?” asked Leon
“Well yeah but is our relationship all sex?” asked cloud
Leon kissed cloud and said “Nothing wrong with that”
They continued to pound each other in the ass
I hope you like the story a little bit. I love leon and cloud they are such a cute couple. Please rate fair. This is my first storyfantasy
(#) skankmuffin2 2008-01-07
umm... yeah. i originally was going to say there were no words but apparently you but it in your comments. There's almost no description, it's too short, their out of character, and the wording's crude. but... umm... if you expanded on the plot line of cloud doubting leon's love for him and put in situations outside of the sex scene, it'd probably end up being longer and easier to write on. oh, and this should be nc-17 with a sexual content rating for future notice...
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