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Internal Bleeding
2 reviewsDid you ever feel like you're bleeding from the inside, even though you're not? That's how Josh and everyone in the gang feels...(I think this is my favorite chapter so far...)
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Virtual Reality
(#) panda_1418 2007-07-01
He can't die, even if he is a traitor!! Oh, the cruel irony. The healer cannot save himself. And I guess I won't see much of this story, seeing as I am leaving for Argentina tomorrow - 18 days, baby!
Hope there's lots of chapters to read when I get back!Virtual Reality
(#) fruit_addict 2007-07-02
yay suspence! yeah there were some major error issues in this story but I love the overall plot. anywho... not breathing? AR! CPR! come on, non breath doesn't mean he's dead does it? Although one thing confuses me... you said he had an emerald watch thingy yet he's a blood hound. How'd he get the watch?
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