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• Her better half

  (#) ryanrossISsove 2007-07-01

  whuuut the fuuuck.
  
  =) well, i'm number one in line for letting this phebe chick die in a fire.
  
  also, i'm kind of feeling left out. i've got no amazing suspicions whatsoever.
  
  i'm just like "so it's this blonde slut who thinks pete's in love with her, and she's going to end up raping him at the end."
  
  i'm right, aren't i?
  
  ;D

  Author's response

  A fire. That's nice. I am not sure how, but Phebe will have to pay in the end.
  Well, the blonde slut will show up in the next chappie. ;)

• Her better half

  (#) kitkatpwl 2007-07-01

  wow.
  ive been reading the story and i really like it!
  great job!! :)
  i cant wait to find out what happens next. im dying to know who the stalker is.
  its obviously someone that they know since Moe said "its you!" or whatever .... hmmm ... hahah
  anyways, keep up the great work!
  cant wait till the next update!!

  Author's response

  Thank you!
  Yes, it's someone they know. Pretty well actually. Good work for catching that (not that I expertly hid that...)

• Her better half

  (#) FreakOfNature 2007-07-01

  Pow widdle patty. Awwww. next chapter soon please!

  Author's response

  Ha ha. Yes, poor dudester.

• Her better half

  (#) whatkatydid 2007-07-02

  You're too clever Puss In Boots....

  Author's response

  purrrrrrr
  Come on, I know that you know.

• Her better half

  (#) peterpandacomplex 2007-07-02

  I can't believe she would hurt Patrick like that! I still have no suspicions as to who would be Pete's stalker. I'm still left in the dark...can someone turn on a light in here?

• Her better half

  (#) peterpandacomplex 2007-07-02

  I can't believe she would hurt Patrick like that! I still have no suspicions as to who would be Pete's stalker. I'm still left in the dark...can someone turn on a light in here?

• Her better half

  (#) peterpandacomplex 2007-07-02

  I can't believe she would hurt Patrick like that! I still have no suspicions as to who would be Pete's stalker. I'm still left in the dark...can someone turn on a light in here?

  Author's response

  Thanks for your review!
  Only a psycho would hurt Patrick! Wait... Sure, there will be light soon.

• Her better half

  (#) riaryder 2007-07-04

  Um, so my suspicions are blown out the water. Totally thrown me off the scent.
  It could be Patrick's secret inner teenage girl.
  Or Kirsch's.
  Or maybe not.
  I'm flummoxed.
  Anyway, nice job. Onwards and upwards x

  Author's response

  You da bomb. :)

• Her better half

  (#) LOVELA 2007-07-10

  I have a twisted thought as to what is going on, but it has a psychological back story to it...shocking...eh?

  Author's response

  Good thinking. ;)

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