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• A Twisted Timeline

  (#) melferd 2007-07-04

  Hee..I love this story...Harry the 6 year old mobster is bats*&t crazy, and wonderful!! Thanks for writing this!!

• A Twisted Timeline

  (#) AlexiDrake 2007-07-04

  Great story,
  
  Please keep the chapters coming. I had a blast reading it, and it is a defenite fun read.

• A Twisted Timeline

  (#) kerrde06 2007-07-04

  I just read the first four chapters of your story so far and I have got to say that it is fantastic. I know that the whole time travel idea has been done a lot already, but I love the spin you put on it. Please keep up the good work and update soon.

• A Twisted Timeline

  (#) DavidMPotter 2007-07-04

  I would love to see Malfoy Manor as a Muggle flop House for indigent half way between jail, Mental hospitals, drug and alcohol treatment and independent living.

• A Twisted Timeline

  (#) whatareyouevensaying 2007-07-04

  Very nice so far. I liked Wormtail's lucky escape, if only because it means Harry won't have an easy time with everything. As for the rest of the story...well, I'm hopeful. The only thing that worried me was Harry referring to Ginny (it was her, right?). I never did like that pairing much...

• A Twisted Timeline

  (#) Cateagle 2007-07-04

  Laughs Awe, more Lucious made the mistake of not reading carefully, his loss. I wonder how Draco is going to handle his come-down in the world? Not well, I suspect, especially since they don't have a house-elf, or at least their prize one, any more. I suspect that if Zabini doesn't manage to bump Harry off, he might try other means of dealing with the competition; again, a fem!Blaise could be "interesting" here.

• A Twisted Timeline

  (#) koppe 2007-07-04

  Interesting twist to the time-travel/body-merge genre... and rather funny. The only thing I'm missing, is Harry's age being a bit more of a hindrence some times...
  Harry a mobster-boss?!? snort Keep it comming. Is "Boss-Zabini" related to Blaise... and does Harry "remember" the Zabinis from his first time at Hogwarts?
  Will Harry make contact with Hermione -- and maybe (some of) the Weasleys... and perhaps Neville and Luna (eg. to start training early)? I really like him to come in contact with Hermione...
  What about the niece of the mobster, will Harry meet her?
  Will Harry have to give-up clearing Sirius until he's able to reaquire the rat? Will Voldemort get back -- if not with a full body, then as a parasite -- earlier because of Peter?
  Will Harry and his gang have a "talk" with the Dursleys? What will the Magical-World do to the Dursleys after Rita's story?
  Keep up the great work and update soon.

• A Twisted Timeline

  (#) koppe 2007-07-04

  Interesting twist to the time-travel/body-merge genre... and rather funny. The only thing I'm missing, is Harry's age being a bit more of a hindrence some times...
  Harry a mobster-boss?!? snort Keep it comming. Is "Boss-Zabini" related to Blaise... and does Harry "remember" the Zabinis from his first time at Hogwarts?
  Will Harry make contact with Hermione -- and maybe (some of) the Weasleys... and perhaps Neville and Luna (eg. to start training early)? I really like him to come in contact with Hermione...
  What about the niece of the mobster, will Harry meet her?
  Will Harry have to give-up clearing Sirius until he's able to reaquire the rat? Will Voldemort get back -- if not with a full body, then as a parasite -- earlier because of Peter?
  Will Harry and his gang have a "talk" with the Dursleys? What will the Magical-World do to the Dursleys after Rita's story?
  Keep up the great work and update soon.

• A Twisted Timeline

  (#) Anaknisatanas 2007-07-05

  This is a great story. It's funny but original in how you present the cliches. I especially enjoyed what Harry just did to Lucius and the fact that Harry is a mob boss. If Zabini really is that paranoid and if Harry can do magic without being detected then he could set up wards or something for Zabini or something at some point to make a deal with him. But I really want to know what happens when someone tries to whack Harry on Zabini's orders. I also want to see what happened to Pettigrew and if Harry will be able to go around and get Sirius freed.

• A Twisted Timeline

  (#) DarkeGray 2007-07-06

  I love the story so far, really funny and even original in its own way. I have a feeling I know who that guys niece really is and if it is who I think it is, I think its a brilliant idea. I also love the whole Crime-boss angle, just awesome. Anyways keep up the good work.

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