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• To Fight the Coming Darkness

  (#) Shaggy37 2007-07-04

  Outstanding chapter!!!! I can't wait to read what happens in the next chapter. I want Hermione to live thanks because I want her to be Harry's mistress later on because why not!? Wow Ginny possibly dieing was something I wasn't expecting but something that doesn't really bother me because she's not nor ever will be one of my favorite characters. Any chance Ron might die?, go for the weasley coupe! Do keep up the outstanding work and update soon please:):):):)

• To Fight the Coming Darkness

  (#) maidros 2007-07-04

  The ending was really interesting - it seems that Pansy seems to enjoy harming Gryffindors even when she is under Neville's control. I wonder if it is Neville's control she resents, or simply found a use for her temporarily controlled state to do something she wanted to do.
  
  Excellent chapter, and hope to see some more soon. By the way, there seems to be a chapter missing in FicWad - the chapter 34 (It's like Mick Jagger Says). I hope you will post the chapter too, at least for the sake of continuity.
  
  Regards,
  Maidros

  Author's response

  Oops. I'll have to rectify that. Thanks for letting me know.~Jim

• To Fight the Coming Darkness

  (#) PerfesserN 2007-07-04

  Excellent story, the characters are three dimensional and flawed and, well, real.
  Neville is delightfully creepy as a "greater good" assasin, and I love Pansy's "does she look like she's moving, Master?"
  Excellent!
  Can't wait for the update!
  Write on,
  write on!

  Author's response

  Glad you like it even though ficwad is missing a chapter. I'll have to figure out how to slip it in here.~Jim

• To Fight the Coming Darkness

  (#) whatareyouevensaying 2007-07-04

  I won't say that Ginny deserved that, but her hands are far from clean. One of the reasons that I like this story is because it shows that war brings out everyone's worst. It's impressive, and it must have taken you ages to plan out so many different subplots. One day I hope to be able to handle a load like that.
  
  Hope to read more soon. Out of curiosity, why did you submit this here so much later than on fanficauthors?

  Author's response

  I keep having issues posting here at ficwad. Apparently, chapter 34 is missing here. I'll have to figure out why. Glad you enjoyed the chapter.~Jim

• To Fight the Coming Darkness

  (#) GryffindorDragon 2007-07-11

  If the corpse Lily has no love for Harry, why would she care for James? Either she feels familial love (and the bond between mother and son is often stronger than between wife and husband) or she doesn't.

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