(#) Mostly_Harmless 2005-04-14"Vash arches back ecstatic
Like an angel in free-fall
Wolfwood, ruined with love, enfolds him again"
While I liked just about everything about this, thes two lines really caught me. I like the descriptions a lot. There was something about the way you wrote this that made everything seem light and surreal. It gave it a dream-like quality that works really well with the theme of love and sexual love. I don't normally read fanfiction poems, but I'm glad that I read this one. Nice job.
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