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14 reviewsAU. TohruKyou. It made it's way into my smallest to deepest cuts on my body, burning them with rage.That's when I passed out. I was officially in. That's when my new life, now begins. First Fruits ...
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(#) Moira 2006-01-31
gaah! what a price for poor kyo-kun to pay just to belong, well, somewhere. very vivid writing there. (ouch, ouch, ouch.) very intriguing, too. i'm wondering, does the gang have anything to do with the sohmas? and what's tohru's role going to be? can't wait for the update!
Author\'s Response: (laughs) I was actually thinking about the update for this story. Though, it's already up on fanfiction.net... actually Prologue to chapter two is up on there. Which I'm re-working on chapter one and chapter two is kicking in some serious gear, making up for the terrible sake for chapter one! (laugh) If that makes any sense. ^.^ (laughs) I had another author/reviewer to say the prologue is vivid. That's what I was trying for. I was sweating on the story actually. I appreciate your feedback! I do hope you'll stick around. ^.^ Thank you!Break
(#) limmy147 2006-10-25
Kinda short. Are you going to wtie more. One thing. Kyou is spelled Kyo.Author's response
(laughs)I do have more written and it's posted on another site. And Kyou is actually spelled correctly. Actually, either one of them are spelled correctly. The Japanese term is spelled as -Kyou- American term it's spelled as -Kyo-. ^.^ Thanks for the review.
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