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Chapter Twenty Three
3 reviewsYoung girls dream of falling in love, planning the most perfect wedding, and spending their lives with their husbands. They have beautiful children and balance work and activities. Waiting for the ...
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A Perfect Hell
(#) Life_is_42 2007-07-06
yelps no! the pregnancy if fine! it has to be. lol see how well you write this?
Ryan is absolutely adorable, brendon's acting cute and you just write everything so beautifully.
good job!
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(#) KatieLove 2007-07-07
Oh man. I don't want something to be wrong. :-(
Great chapter. More soon.A Perfect Hell
(#) The_best_cliche 2007-08-18
This story is amazingly written. The emotional attachement you feel to each character as each chapter passes is amazing. There are many authors on this website that could definitely learn a thing from reading one of your chapters.
Please continue.
this story breaks my heart =( poor makayla. She is trying to protect her family and her unborn baby.
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