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The End
29 reviewsThe Final Battle is over. Harry has left Britain, leaving a devastated magical community, a lost Hermione, and a blinded Luna. Hermione becomes Professor McGonagall's apprentice while she cares f...
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Brother Z
(#) BJH 2007-07-07
That twas a really nice story. Good wins out, evil dets its due, and most people live happily ever after.
Although I'm still a bit confused as to when Harry is Z and when Z is the youthful Harry. Harry and Hermione are legally married and yet Z and Hermione are legally joined as well. I know in truth it wouldn't matter but then should someone put those two little tidbits together it could still make things sticky for the trio.
A line from Luna in the preceeding chapter is the part I think I will take with me from this fic though. "My borrowed eyes", she says; that's a rather poetic statement, isn't it? And not a bad title for a story either.
Thanks so much for a very pleasant read.
BJHBrother Z
(#) whatareyouevensaying 2007-07-07
Excellent ending, all things considered. Snape literally got what he deserved and Harry was able to be himself a bit more. Looking forward to your next story.Brother Z
(#) Meteoricshipyards 2007-07-09
Nice ending. Wrapped Snape up very well.
Thanks for the story. Good luck on any future ones.
Tom A.Brother Z
(#) Wonderbee31 2007-07-09
Great ending to this story, and almost felt bad that Snape just could not let it go in the end, and that Albus continued to protect him beyond death, oh well, Snape got what he deserved, as did the new trio.Brother Z
(#) brad 2007-07-09
I really thought that there was a good chance that Snape was going to set up a prank rather than do something evil. But I concede that I didn't think it out; you've kept Snape in character with what you did. There's no such humour in the man, but he is thoroughly riddled with spite, malice and other such negative ills.
Still thought that Harry himself was a bit 'evil' in exacting his revenge. Why the physical torture if he could still curse the man to stay away and never return? Oh well.
So ... even though Harry was rejuvenated, he still posed as Z for the rest of his life, still hid under glamours, except for the few times when Harry Potter showed up at the Wizengamot?
Thanks for all the stories, I'll be very interested in your thoughts about DH in a couple of weeks time! Maybe you could post your thoughts to your Yahoo group? Cheers.Brother Z
(#) UdderPD 2007-08-24
As I have no doubt said before brilliant and I know that I normally review on Fiction Alley but I am seriously considering giving them up as a bad job.
I found this here by posting a message on my Yahoo group upd_happy_hp . and having found it I can give up F.A.
TTFN UdderPDBrother Z
(#) saugart 2007-09-07
You write "every addition you have made sense". I suggest since instead of /sense/.
I liked the Snape-bashing. I thought Harry/Z was very merciful to leave him an eye.
I having trouble using the rating system to mark good things about this fine story. I know I've used it in the past. Huh. I'll try to contact the admins about it.
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