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• Brother Z

  (#) TxA_GunFighter 2007-09-12

  Outstanding story, I enjoyed it very much. Thanks for sharing.
  
  gunny

• Brother Z

  (#) silverleafhp 2007-09-30

  Your writing is excellent as always. However, I still have the same problems that I always do.
  
  Cannon Hermione is a prude, plain and simple.
  
  Now don't take that the wrong way, I really like her character. Yet all your fics have her as some sort of progressive nudist or something like that.
  
  I don't have a problem with nudist or threesomes, foursomes, anything like that. As a matter of fact I prefer that in HP fics.
  
  I also like to see Hermione in those types of fics, the only thing I find hard to belive is that she is the one iniatating them. i.e. I think cannon Hermione would freak out if Luna ever came on to her.
  
  I just think that Hermione shouldn't be the instigator in these situations, she should be the one that has to be talked into it.
  
  My next problem is the relationships themselves, they are never really equal. Harry, who may start off being in love with Luna, and she with him, bring Hermione into the fold. Yet, by the time the fic ends, your fics always have an undertone of the two females being more in love with each other, and that Harry is just there to provide a penis when they get excited.
  
  Then there are other things. Harry, being a 35 year old virgin.....unrealistic in the extreme. And yet somehow, the most prudish "canon" character (Hermione), has been banging away since her fifth year or some such.
  
  At any rate, I still enjoy your writting, I always have.

• Brother Z

  (#) dennisud 2008-01-17

  Nicely done and I am happy he got to be with 'both' of them! Hope to see more of ths trio in yours and others stories. You should consider putting some of these on FFN, and get an even bigger audience!
  
  dennisud

• Brother Z

  (#) drifter 2008-05-26

  As before, I agree with the other reviewers. A very well done story that is VERY enjoyable!
  
  Again, would you consider including your Chapter descriptions in your text chapter headings?
  
  Thanks for a good read.
  
  
  May the MUSES always be with you!!!
  ^_^
  

• Brother Z

  (#) keichan2 2008-12-23

  I'm glad that Snape was REALLY punished!
  I hadn't realized that he had TAKEN Luna's eyes (I thought slash misread that they had been irremediably damaged).
  The fact that he did probably do that to have potions ingredients disgust me so much that I even think that his punishment was not enough (removing ALL his magic AND rendering him unable to practice potion -- by afflicting him with some sort of uncontrollable shaking -- on top of what Harry did to him would be a 'good start'...)
  

• Brother Z

  (#) noreenklose 2009-04-24

  Great story. I enjoyed it very much. I like how Snape was finally brought to realize that he had NO One but himself to blame for his punishment.
  Thank you for writing. I'm going to read another of your stories.
  KUTGW,
  Noreen

• Brother Z

  (#) Lientjuhh 2010-03-20

  I like it.. Well done.. :) But I would have loved to know what happened to the daughters of harry.. :)

• Brother Z

  (#) Kairan1979 2014-04-10

  Excellent story.
  I especially liked the last part. Snape was given a last choice to stop being... well, himself, and condemned himself by trying to exact the revenge. And considering everything he did, I don't think his punishment was over the top. Nice touch with leaving him a bit of magic, so he could feel what he lost.

• Brother Z

  (#) ginnyizmygurl 2018-02-28

  Wonderful
  

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