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The Pros and Cons of Breathing.
10 reviewsWill she be okay? You didn't see this coming... WARNING: Violence and swearing.
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Down the road, not across the street
(#) angellbaby28 2007-07-08
i've never read anything like this! it's so great! lots of drama! awesome job!Down the road, not across the street
(#) Alysha16 2007-07-08
OMG!!!!!! THAT CRAZY BIOTCH!!!!!!!
THATS WAS SOOOOOO GOOD!!!!!!!NO IT WAS MORE LIKE AMAZING!!!!!!!!!
OKAY LETS START FROM THE BEGINING SHALL WE:
FIRST:OMG WHEN WILL WALKED OUT SIDE OF THE ROOM TO TALK TO ON HIS PHONE HE WASNT CALLING THE BOYS HE WAS CALLING THAT BIOTCH CHASTITY!!!!!
SECOND:WILL IS OFFICIALLY A STALKER JERK THAT NEEDS TO GET A LIFE AND LEAVE AMARA ALONE SO THAT SHE CAN GO LIVE HAPPIELY WITH RYAN BY HER SIDE.
THIRD-YAY!!! GO ME!!!! I KNEW THAT THE KIDNAPPING,AND THE WHOLE PICS OF PETE IN NEW YORK THING HAD SOMETHING TO DO WITH CHASTITY
FOURTH-I LUV THIS STORY TO DEATH!!!!!!!
FITH-I HOPE AMARA BEATS THE CRAP OUT OF HER FOR HITTING HER
SIXTH-HOW ABOUT WILL AND CHASTITY GET TOGETHER AND LIVE THE REST OF THERE MISERABLE LIVES TOGETHER IN JAIL!!!!
OMG...IS RYAN GONNA FIND HER?IS SHE GONNA DIE?WATS GONNA HAPPEN TO HER? THE SUSPENSE IS REALLY KILLING ME OVER HERE!!!!!!!!!PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!MY ADDICTION FOR THIS STORY IS AT AN ULTIMATE HIGH,AND IM IN NEED OF MY NEXT FIX...LOL
~Alysha~
p.s. i know that i havent been reviewing as much lately as usually do, i just moved so it was alittle hectic,but now im back and im going to review more then i ever did befor...lol...oh yeah i should have my own story up soon so if u could do me a fav and r&r it that would be awsome...luv ur story to death!!!!!Down the road, not across the street
(#) rainbowsprinkles08 2007-07-08
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(#) can-you-feel-this 2007-07-08
HO-LY CRAP. O MY GOD. HOLY CRAP. HOLY CRAP. So Wil is in obessive love with Amara, so he hired Chastity to seduce Ryan, so then Amara wouldn't want Ryan, but Chastity ended up falling in love with Ryan and felt betrayed when she realized that Ryan and Amara were in love, so she had Amara kidnapped, and now Wil is going to take her far away from both Pete and Ryan because he's convinced that Amara should be with him? Am I getting this all right? AM I? HOLY CRAP. That's a lot of stuff going on. And I love every sentence of it!!!!! You seriously need to update as soon as you possibly can because I am THIS CLOSE to taking a plane to wherever you live in the world and pulling a Chastity stunt and kidnapping you, bringing you back to America, and forcing you to write another chapter. Or you could just, you know update really soon and save me the money for a plane ticket. I guess that could work too. THE SUSPENSE IS KILLING ME!!!!
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(#) Life_is_42 2007-07-08
twisted....and evil. and oh so addicting to read! :D
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(#) storytimexfanfics 2007-07-08
goodness, your stories are ADDICTING!
it took me 'till one o'clock in the morning, but i read 'em all, and i must say, you're an amazing writer...
i almost cried a couple of time..
oh, and do write more very very soon. i apsolutly hate it when people end like this!Down the road, not across the street
(#) helen_of_troy 2007-07-08
I'm not going to scare you this time- don't worry!
I loved it :D Chastity needs to DIEEEE she's horrible! Look what you're doing to me again... I still can't decide Pete/Ryan for Amara. Oooh I know- I'll have Ryan and Pete can have Amara, I like that idea ; )
Anyways I have rabbited on enough so thank you for updating it was awesome and thanks for the dedication- you rock!
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