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Being Unworthy of Your Love (Is a Riot)
3 reviewsPart #2...the one where I actually have an Author's Note.
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We're Both On Borderline Obsession
(#) Life_is_42 2007-07-09
"I really don't know how to inspire you at all, but if it helps, I'm in a semi-retarded relationship, a sequel of my story is practically being shoved down my throat, and the movie of my life will star the man in my semi-retarded relationship. And my life is coming full circle, finally, since like...four years ago. Or five. I don't remember anymore."
Hayley's eyes grew wide before she murmured, "Tell me everything."
love the description. love Hayley's reaction to the description.
love your writting.
one more chapter? sniffles all good things must come to an....end?
Love
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(#) trueLIEx3 2007-07-09
You just made... my life. Seriously.
Well, Paramore is my life, as well as Panic! but yes.
That was amazing. And did you know that That's What You Get is my favorite song on the whole Riot! CD? Yeah.
And Hayley's like, my idol. =).
You're crazy and I love you! More!
OHYEAH. I can't choose a quote. I'm sorry. If I chose one, every line would be a quote. ;].We're Both On Borderline Obsession
(#) danceislife 2007-07-09
only one?! What will I do?!
I adore Hayley's hair. I wanna dye mine like that but I'm trying to win this pageant...GRR!We're Both On Borderline Obsession
(#) peterpandacomplex 2007-07-09
"But by the end of the third day, Alice decided she wanted to skip the second to last day of filming. She didn't know why."
I guess sometimes things you don't know the reason/answer is what helps you out the most...I don't know, this sounded so much better before I started typing it.We're Both On Borderline Obsession
(#) KatieLove 2007-07-09
Silence. Then Alice voiced shakily, "I guess...that's what I get when I let my heart win..."
Silence. Hayley exclaimed, "Whoa!" And wrote down what Alice had said.
Ahhhhhh! I love it.
Steven Smith singing.
I'm so sad to see this end, but I do believe that you said this might be a triology when you ended "Trust Me, Please" right?
I hope so.We're Both On Borderline Obsession
(#) Geets 2007-07-13
are you fucking kidding me?!?!?! ONE MORE CHAPTER LEFT!??!?!?! NOOOOOOOO!!!
so sorry I havent reviewed in a while: i havent been on, and then realised that you HAD updated, and was like "wow, you've written loads!" and dude, was it good! so fantastic; the way you've written Brendon and Alice's emotions was brilliant and so realistic! I loved the kiss. That was really well written, and the whole of the last "chapter" with the lyrics and such. Especially when Alice has that brainwave, lol.
I cannot believe its almost over... Ill be so sad... START THE SEQUEL SOON!!! lol. You're doing an amazing job, so congrats! Geets xxWe're Both On Borderline Obsession
(#) glindapsawyer 2007-08-13
favorite chapter in this entire story (that doesnt feature brendon). i SO knew when the flaming hair was mentioned and the boy with the bandana that it was paramore kids. im just good like that. haha.
"our hearts had started a riot."
fucking love it!
:D
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