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Out of the frying pan...
6 reviewsKirsh tries to comfort Pete after his horrible experience and defies Maxwell's orders on more than one occasion. Moe awakes.
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Her better half
(#) LOVELA 2007-07-12
I really want to know the ending because I want to know if what I'm thinking is what you are thinking. If not, then I know I have a very sick and twisted mind and I'll fill you in on that on a later date.Author's response
I am starting to wish that your suspicion is wrong because then it would be more twisted than my ending and I would love to hear about that! ;)Her better half
(#) fob4ever 2007-07-12
aww. thats sad. but i love the suspense! its crazy C:Author's response
Thanksies!Her better half
(#) whatkatydid 2007-07-12
Sweet. I don't have many words tonight, sorry. But I enjoyed reading it, not as much as the others, but then again, I'm not in the best frame of mine. I feel harsh saying that. I guess because a part of me just wants to find out, you know if it was a book I would have skipped ahead just to get a glimpse....
that's what I'm saying.
Is it alright? I dunnoAuthor's response
Well... I think that maybe I am dragging this out to much, delaying the resolution perhaps? But I wasn't doing that intentionally and also I wanted to depict the characters more, mainly Pete & Kirsh, of course.
Anyways, thanks for being honest and maybe I should thank you for still reading this? ;) The thing is you'll find out in the next chappie, I promise.
It's alright.Her better half
(#) moocow 2007-07-12
FINALY!
jesus. Pete finaly getting what he deserves.Author's response
Yuck. It just makes me sick how much you adore him... ;)Her better half
(#) riaryder 2007-07-19
Oh wait a minute.
I have this sneaking suspicion that I know what's going on here. And I may not have been so far off the mark with people's inner teenage girl. Just had the wrong guy, maybe.
Well, onwards to see if I'm anywhere near right. And a point for you, of course xAuthor's response
Oh, you knew it. ;) Thank you, love!
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