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Journeys Beginning
3 reviewsThe Dursley's abandoned Harry after finding him on their doorstep because of a strange transformation he goes through. Crossover with Doctor Who
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A Child Of Time
(#) bored2121 2007-07-18
yeaaa (jumping up and down) not a one shot i am happy now.
but i do have a question if he is one years old how could have time lord mum or/and dad unless they are still alive but what about lily and james???Author's response
(scratches head) Can you rephrase that question.
Harry is one years old just like in the book. James and Lily are is parents but you will find a secret about one of them later. Not saying which but that will be how Harry related is to a Time Lord. Don't forget Time Lords can travel through time and space. An Harry's parents are dead no changing that.
I can give you a tip but it might be giving away too much. So if you want to know just ask.A Child Of Time
(#) Cateagle 2007-07-18
Hmm, I like your clueless, and somewhat inept Dumbledore, he's a change from the usual run of depictions. I suspect there are going to be a lot of surprises when his intruments detect the departure of the TARDIS. I can see a Doctor-educated Harry showing up at Hogwarts for his first year and confounding -everyone-.Author's response
I wasn't going for cluesless but more like old man afected by his age but I am glad you like the way he is and that he is different. I was also trying to keep him close to character (which is hard for me to do). Technicly the Tardis already left that is why the watch is saying traveling. Dumbledore learned Harry was missing a couple days after the doctor got him. Sorry to say Harry will only be visiting Hogwarts not attending (at least not during the current time).A Child Of Time
(#) Dragen 2007-07-19
What another great chapter, I can't wait to see what happens next, so PLEASE update again soon, as I would like to see what happens next.A Child Of Time
(#) Dragen 2007-07-19
What another great chapter, I can't wait to see what happens next, so PLEASE update again soon, as I would like to see what happens next.A Child Of Time
(#) Wonderbee31 2007-07-26
Good part here, and will be looking forward to who Harry might be related to, though the only ones I could think of off the top of my head would be the Rani, the Monk, Professor Chronitis, and Glitz. Here's looking forward to what happens next.A Child Of Time
(#) Meteoricshipyards 2007-08-30
You probably want to get a beta; your tenses don't always match and you use the wrong words in a few places ("AN" instead of "AND"). Also your conversation between Dumbledore and Petunia was stilted. Perhaps try reading it out loud to yourself to see how it flows.
But it's an interesting story.
(My guess - Romana is Lily's grandmother, but Petunia was adopted or a half sister).
Thanks for writing this.
Tom A.
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