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• The Two of Us.

  (#) fobgal1 2007-07-19

  Ah! What did this guy Brody do to her? Im so freaking curious that its going to kill me.
  And sheesh Patrick kinda messed things up this time.
  Please update soon.

• The Two of Us.

  (#) Melim 2007-07-19

  This is my absolute favorite chapter of the whole story, not because I've contributed to some hilarious lines, but because of the fact that the entire party was singing Jessie's Girl to Samantha. If that's not just great story telling, then I don't know what is.

• The Two of Us.

  (#) watch_the_sky 2007-07-19

  holy jambalaya, patrick is an idiot. besides the fact that this was completely heart breaking because patrick just messed up horribly and we still dont know why he isnt allowed to love her .. this was absolutely hilarious. i seriously laughed out loud almost the entire time and now my mom is staring at me like im some sort of crazy, but eh, its worth it for your stories.

• The Two of Us.

  (#) xxpatdxx 2007-07-19

  Okay I absoulutely ADORE this! Gabe and the guys are hilarious... and Patrick is such a true charicter... I need more this is amazing thanks so much!!!

• The Two of Us.

  (#) whatkatydid 2007-07-20

  Frick, you're on fire girl. Exciting and funny and just plain amazing. the word plain is funny don't you think? I think we use it on the wrong context but we're British and we were here first. :-P
  
  You're truly growing as a writer, I'm loving the pace and style of this story.
  xxxxxxxx

• The Two of Us.

  (#) riaryder 2007-08-14

  Things I love about this chapter?
  -"The world is going to end soon if he can impress his girlfriend with Star Wars facts." Classic line. Classic, I tell you.
  -Gabe. I have no clue who he is, but I love him in this story.
  -The party. The interactions between the characters are just too good.
  
  But on another note. How dumb is Sam? Jesse sounds like a fucktard and Patrick is just scrumptious. Uh, hello? :)
  
  And nice suspense at the end there.
  Loving this story. I'm going to drop points ALL over it. If fuckwad will let me x

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