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Chapter 06: Moony and the Mob
7 reviewsMuch to his displeasure, Harry is thrown back through time into his six year old body. As a result, Harry decides to contort the timeline, purely for his own amusement.
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(#) PerfesserN 2007-07-22
Oooooooh, an adult in a child's body meets a child with the intelligence of an adult. I like it. Please write more!A Twisted Timeline
(#) whatareyouevensaying 2007-07-22
Very amusing. Got a bit bored with Remus, but throwing Hermione into the mix made it worthwhile.A Twisted Timeline
(#) Cateagle 2007-07-23
wicked chuckle Heh, I imagine there's going to be a lot more in the way of headache-inducing information and events for Remus before things are over with. The end section was amusing, even if it was obvious from quite some distance; 'twill be interesting to see if Harry does an early "tell all" to Hermione and gets her on, and by, his side. I almost feel sorry for Dumbles, he, for once, doesn't even have all the data he needs to understand matters, let alone a sufficiently open mind to follow matters to their logical conclusion. I do suspect he's going to get confronted with his manifold failings and transgressions at some point.
Definitely an enjoyable chapter.A Twisted Timeline
(#) Anaknisatanas 2007-07-23
Great update. I loved seeing how you introduced Hermione. The bit with Remus getting snagged and Dumbles conversation with Phineas was a nice touch as well.A Twisted Timeline
(#) TxA_GunFighter 2007-09-02
Very good chapter, love the part about Hermione.
gunnyA Twisted Timeline
(#) batsnumbereleven 2008-02-12
Please try reading through before posting - a good storyline is being ruined by off-putting turns of phrase that make no sense.
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