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Twenty Two - No One Else Can Touch Us.
3 reviewsIt's hard trying to get it right, i'm worried about how this tunred out.
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Broken Down On Memory Lane
(#) watch_the_sky 2007-07-25
that was absolutely amazing and tragically heart breaking. you are so good at what you do and i, of course, to this day, am a loyal fan of everything you write.Broken Down On Memory Lane
(#) whatkatydid 2007-07-26
I adored it. I can't list all the reasons why, i think the fact I know you're holding back from writing what you want to ( or what we want to ) so badly and your patience is executed with such precision, it's worth every chaptering wait. I liked the idea of the interview, carefully drawing out both of their super(ficical) feelings for each other.
You're smazing Alex. Check on it.
ILU
xxxxxxxxxxxBroken Down On Memory Lane
(#) fobgal1 2007-07-27
Umm wow.
I seriously want to slit Seans throat. Its bascially his fault that Kate can't have kids. This chapter was amazing. And well it just showed that you can't give up. Kate and Patrick were meant to be no matter what.
Please update soon.Broken Down On Memory Lane
(#) ssketchator 2007-08-15
Oh, oh, oh. I loved this. The emotion was fantastic, the end was so sad but so perfect. They still love each other!!!Broken Down On Memory Lane
(#) duckapple 2007-08-16
I demand miracle babies.
Amazing stump sperm fighting against all odds.Broken Down On Memory Lane
(#) GwenMerlon 2007-09-11
Alex! You know, yesterday, I just decided to read all of it through (because my computer was being so damn slow) instead of reviewing each and every chapter... Well, now that I'm back at my boring job (pretending to work) I thought I've tell you what I think. (But please bare with me, this computer is as slow as all get out as well)
I loved this chapter. I loved that Patrick poured everything down the drain, and that the interview was so completely adorable, and that they had that beautiful connecting moment at the end... sigh
Can I have him??
Please??
Well, I didn't check to see when you last posted this, but I hope there is more soon! You are such an amazing writer and I missed reading your stuff all summer long!!! LOVE THIS, LOVE YOU!
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