(#) whatareyouevensaying 2007-07-25Great update! It's a pity that Draco was able to kill him, but one of them had to die, and I suppose you've got other plans for Malfoy. He really did get a bit unhinged in the end...it's almost a shame. Not quite, though. Looking forward to more, particularly after Scrimgeour's escape.
(#) Geovanni_Luciano 2007-07-25This reminds me alot of that korean college kids. It's what happens to people when they feel they have nothing else to lose and decide to take the whole world out with them. Neville really deserved to suffer a little more for being stupid and indescremenate against the Slytherins. I also think that you should have had him have a complete psychotic break but oh well. Can't have it my way all the time. Turn me loose!!!!
- Outstanding chapter!!!! Wow thats the way Neville should always die in a blaze of glory fighting. I however think Neville was so hell bent on revenge that it twisted him into something not worth knowing in the long run. I loved what Neville had Parkinslut do that was awesome. What will happen to Neville if he isn't really dead? Do keep up the outstanding work and update soon please:):):):)
- Are you trying to write `Charnel House'? At this rate, the slate will be wiped clean, with no one left in the magical world.
Anyways, it is very impressive to see someone who depicts the war accurately - it always brings out the worst in people, although I must admit I never visualised Neville as the magical equivalent of a suicide bomber.
Hope to see some more soon.
(#) GryffindorDragon 2007-10-10Looks like the shock of losing everything sent Neville off the deep end. Kind of sad. But Neville should have finished Draco off first. A penknife would puncture a lung, but would it really kill him off that fast? Since you said penknife, I picture something with maybe a 2 in. blade. But killing Neville so easily, it must have been a "pocketknife" with a 3 or 4 in blade or longer. Good action! Those aurors weren't too smart, not covering their backs or watching the map for others.
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