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Within my Prologue
3 reviewsWARNING: One of the main topics of this story is self-abuse. Not graphic, but plays a big part in the story. May be a sensitive topic to others. Delilah is now dating a new kid at the academy. N...
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Within Temptation
(#) FunkyMonkey 2007-07-23
very touching. Great start, cant wait until the next chapter. And i agree with vivian. Dont listen to the "dot" person. He is not worth your time.Within Temptation
(#) panda_1418 2007-07-23
I love your original story ideas. People have covered Delilah dating other guys, but never it driving Julius so far that he abuses himself. Your creative mind never ceases to astound me, and your talents always make me smile. Update soon!Within Temptation
(#) fruit_addict 2007-09-29
Nice begining to a story. some mistakes but not that bad. I love first person stories, always keeps me on my toes reading it ;) oh and did Scarlette and Al really adopt them when they were four? cuz I thought they were older than that, like in their teens already.Within Temptation
(#) fruit_addict 2007-09-29
Nice begining to a story. some mistakes but not that bad. I love first person stories, always keeps me on my toes reading it ;) oh and did Scarlette and Al really adopt them when they were four? cuz I thought they were older than that, like in their teens already.
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