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Harry Potter and the Tower of Pime
(#) whatareyouevensaying 2007-07-28
Well, you worked so hard in keeping it different from canon and justifying Harry being sorted into Gryffindor that I can't really dislike it. It's a shame how limiting it can be, but I now have a lot more faith that you'll be careful to keep things contrary to canon. I think my main problem with the usual trio friendship is just that it's not only been done by JKR, but by nearly every author to do an AU or time travel story. Precious few authors think outside of the box, but I think you're one of the few. Only time will tell, though, so I'm looking forward to the next chapter.Harry Potter and the Tower of Pime
(#) Cateagle 2007-07-28
Very interesting divergence from canon, similar but yet quite different. I loved the encounter with Malfoy and what it led to; the way Harry easily took care of his goons and then him was likely an eye-opener for a number of people. I suspect Malfoy seniof will not appreciate his son alienating Harry Potter -that- early in life. The bit with the Sorting Hat was interesting and amusing and it'll be quite interesting to see if a much more studious, thoughtful, and self-confident Harry has a bigger effect on this year than the one in canon.Harry Potter and the Tower of Pime
(#) Shaggy37 2007-08-13
Outstanding chapter! I loved the whole chapter. I especially loved the sorting part of the chapter, that to me is how the book should of been written when it came time to sort Harry. Do keep up the outstanding work and update soon please:):):):)Harry Potter and the Tower of Pime
(#) Nautilus 2007-08-23
cure me... i personally agree with u... whilst i was able to safely diegest the 5 book, the 6 and 7 left much to be desired for.. i hope to see u do better, and at this stage i have faith in ur story line... its nice to see u have a plan outline for the complete saga... hoping to see more update from you... also how harry changes and how tht will affect those around him.. also the little bit with dumbles was great...Harry Potter and the Tower of Pime
(#) ticky 2008-08-21
I'd like to first say I am enjoying this story alot. That I would really like to know how you justify putting hermione with the gryfs. Atfer the debate the hat and harry had, stating that harry shouldn't be a claw because he wasn't a die hard studyer, and the fact that in cannon the only time Hermione show the abounding courage gryfs are known for is when she was following harry. Now don't get me wrong ,I'm a big Hermione fan. I think she'd make a great any thing but not a great gryf.
P.S. I apologize for my grammar.
P.P.S. keep up the great work.
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