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Invitation to a Beheading
(#) Sch1av0na 2007-08-30
So far most of this story makes little sense as it appears to be make up of flashbacks with very little to connect them together in a coherent tale.
I think you need to fill in some of the gaps so that the readers have a better understanding of what has happened.Author's response
It's a Alternate History so it will take another chapter or two to give you firm ground. Since you've mentioned it, I'll try to ensure that the next few chapters are a bit more liner, at least until readers have some firm footing.Invitation to a Beheading
(#) banner 2008-01-11
That scene with the Seer (or whoever she was) was incredible! It left me reeling and disoriented. Great job.
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