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Chapter 08: The Descent of the Dursleys
3 reviewsMuch to his displeasure, Harry is thrown back through time into his six year old body. As a result, Harry decides to contort the timeline, purely for his own amusement.
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(#) pi3142 2007-09-01
I think dumbles got off too lightly yet - but think you got something cool in store for him don't you?A Twisted Timeline
(#) Cateagle 2007-09-02
Hmm, so now Harry's return and Dumbledore's interference have created another departure, the earlier return of Voldemort; I suspect this is going to cause interesting problems for Harry in more than one way. On the other hand, I wonder how long it's going to take Dumbledore to figure out just where he went wrong, if he'll ever admit that he did. I loved Crouch's actions and how Dumbledore is on the offensive. It should be interesting to see if Dumbles offers up Harry's 'kidnapping' in an effort to deflect interest from him and get Harry back (give you odds it doesn't work out as he expects at all).
It should be interesting to see how he next perturbs the timeline.A Twisted Timeline
(#) whatareyouevensaying 2007-09-02
Exciting chapter. The conflicts with Dumbledore, Crouch and Skeeter are only just beginning, but Harry should be able to handle the last two with ease. I like what you've done with Voldemort as well.A Twisted Timeline
(#) Alorkin 2007-09-04
While I agree Vernon should be punished...severely, I don't think the Kiss was the right choice. Of course, even in canon, Barty Crouch was a ruthless one. It also allows you to introduce Barty Jr, whom we have never heard of before,
Dumbledore's attempt to kidnap arry and force him back into Durzkaban was a nicely worked out bit. I wonder how he found them, though. Harry derailed that with a few well choose words. Ain't it great how magic works?
As always I eagerly await the next posting. Alorkin
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