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• A Twisted Timeline

  (#) oximoron 2007-09-18

  Fantastic story, one of my favorite stories at the moment, Keep up the good work

• A Twisted Timeline

  (#) whatareyouevensaying 2007-09-19

  Is there any chance of Crabbe and Goyle dieing anytime soon? I'm actually getting a little tired of those two.
  
  I love the Harry/Hermione moments, and introducing Blaise into the mix was also a good idea. Hope to see more soon.

• A Twisted Timeline

  (#) stealacandy 2007-09-19

  Hi!
  
  I was thinking hard on where did I read that stupid Goyle, inteligent-but-mute Crabb motif, then remembered it was in your other story...
  
  Anyway, just wanted to say, Harry's a Mafia boss - he would more likely order someone to wack Remington - show him what a real Remington is - then prank him. That's just plain stupid. I'd imagine he'd orded his removal, and make a contract on Snape's head as well, as an afterthought.
  
  Why would Voldemort send Snape after the Philosopher Stone? A single Death Eater for such an important mission? You would have thought he'd send his best and brightest - en mass. Or come for it himesle. And didn't everyone believe it was in a Gringots vault, anyway?
  
  Alright then, keep up the good work (read: "Update, you sonuvabitch!").
  
  Toodles,
  
  stealacandy
  (Joined ficwad just so I could review - can't you just check the "Allow anonymous reviews" or something?)

• A Twisted Timeline

  (#) Teresa 2007-09-19

  Shakes head.......too bad bad Dumbledore doesn't realize that he's sending Snape off to Harry with the execution papers already signed....chuckle. As for that idiot teacher and his pet I hope that Harry and Hermione run them out of school quickly! Thanks for another fun chapter!

• A Twisted Timeline

  (#) TxA_GunFighter 2008-02-04

  Good chapter.
  
  gunny

• A Twisted Timeline

  (#) Dragen 2008-07-01

  Another great chapter mate, I love how the story is going and can't wait to see what you have planed next.
  
  I like how Harry reacted in how Flamel knew who he really was. The fool Severus Snape think he could get the Stone.
  
  Oh this ingorying Professor Remington Q. Gillworth the third, Esquire, talking about himself in a third person point of view. The fucking bastard, doing that to Hermione.
  
  I like that Harry is loosening Hermione up.

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