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Begin Learning... Now
2 reviewsThe first days of classes begin, and Hope receives a letter.
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Light of Hope
(#) jay21317 2007-09-26
ok its an awsome story butsome of its a bit hard to understand and when u got em speaking telepathicly u should put it so we can tell whos talking its hard to figure out whos saying what when all there is on ether end of hte words is \/ any way great story cant wait for next chapter and i hope u show us the potion class cant wait for thatLight of Hope
(#) oldchuck 2008-12-11
I'm Old Chuck and I'm really old. I get wound up in the writing sometimes and need to read some parts over again. The confusion I find most often is your occasional omission of a word or the introduction of a word that seems not to fit in the sentence.
Your premise is really interesting. It was mind-boggling at first to imagine twins and the telepathic resolution of Hope's blindness.
I hope you haven't given up on the story; it has grown on me and I'm ready for more, please...
Old Chuck
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