- Outstanding chapter!!!! I can't wait to read what happens in the next chapter. I get this feeling that Jericho is going to really go balistic when he finally gets to fighting Ferres. I also get this idea that maybe Jericho might end up being the Legendary Legatis rank, that would tick off poor stupid Ferres! Do keep up the outstanding work and update soon please:):):):)
- ok heres my idea, awsom story, please stop neglecting rachel have harry adopt here or something, as harry though not jerico, im but a humble reader that likes this story but hate the pain you put rachel through.
please do this humble reader a favoure and make harry more contious.
(#) anakhuskerfan 2009-01-31I really like this story, it is original and despite the fact I don't know much about the Templar I can still follow it. I hope you write more about Rachel in the next chapter and maybe have Harry/Jerico adopt her. Can't wait to read more, keep up the good work!!!
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