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Violent Mourning
8 reviewsThings have settled down for Jericho. Now its time to do something very important...grieve for he fallen.
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Harry Potter and the Order of the Templar
(#) Shaggy37 2007-09-28
Outstanding chapter!!!! I can't wait to read what happens in the next chapter. I get this feeling that Jericho is going to really go balistic when he finally gets to fighting Ferres. I also get this idea that maybe Jericho might end up being the Legendary Legatis rank, that would tick off poor stupid Ferres! Do keep up the outstanding work and update soon please:):):):)Harry Potter and the Order of the Templar
(#) hayeth 2007-09-28
If only things were that predictable =)
You are right about some things...but not all.Harry Potter and the Order of the Templar
(#) MrPowell 2007-11-29
awesome story... poor harry. he seems to be a bit lost most of the time... quite understandably of course, but you've gotta pity the guy...Harry Potter and the Order of the Templar
(#) MrPowell 2007-11-29
oh yeah and the Templar remind me strongly of the Mandolorian culture from star wars without the mercenary edge...Harry Potter and the Order of the Templar
(#) jacoc9453 2008-02-16
ok heres my idea, awsom story, please stop neglecting rachel have harry adopt here or something, as harry though not jerico, im but a humble reader that likes this story but hate the pain you put rachel through.
please do this humble reader a favoure and make harry more contious.Harry Potter and the Order of the Templar
(#) simplesailor 2008-09-22
Great story man, I am really diggin' it. It looks as if it has been a while since you updated it last, have you abandoned the fic or just put it on hold? Hope to see a new post sometime and find out what the centaurs are up to.Harry Potter and the Order of the Templar
(#) anakhuskerfan 2009-01-31
I really like this story, it is original and despite the fact I don't know much about the Templar I can still follow it. I hope you write more about Rachel in the next chapter and maybe have Harry/Jerico adopt her. Can't wait to read more, keep up the good work!!!Harry Potter and the Order of the Templar
(#) aka_thenewguy 2009-09-12
This is really good story. Original and well written. I hope you take it back up.
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