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The Slayer, The Avatar And The Guardian Of Light
(#) Geovanni_Luciano 2007-09-28
OK, interesting. I have to say this as a warning. Do not get too muddled down with bringing in some originality. If you bring it too much it will hurt the story, like Sam Stone's bit. Too many crossovers will leave the reader going, "HUH?"Author's response
You just lost me with Sam's Stone but I got the message.
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(#) pyrotechnicist 2007-09-29
hey this fic is pretty good.
um i have to say... a little too much descriptive
but otherwise it was fine.
update soon if possible please
xoxox
pyrotechnicist
Author's response
Thats one of the problems with writing, everyone wants something different, some like the detail, others don't , some want romance others want action etc, as a writer I have to try to create a balance and do the best I can to please everyone.
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(#) TxA_GunFighter 2008-01-16
Bummer, looks like they are not playing nice.
gunny
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