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Baby, Seasons Change But People Don't.
(#) ClandestineUnited 2007-09-30
Aw, those memories were ah-doh-rable.
You write so wonderfully.
And you're welcome - reviews help authors know their writing is being acknowledged!Author's response
Thank you!
And yes, I do like to receive acknowledgement from the readers. I'm sure any author could tell you that. I can't thank you enough for all the amazing reviews.Baby, Seasons Change But People Don't.
(#) i_heart_cliches 2007-09-30
wow. that was cute. I hope everything gets resolved soon. It's really sad )': I still love how you describe things. You write beautifully.
You're not being too pushy. :P everyone should review!Author's response
Awe shucks. Thanks sooo much.
Okay, good. I didn't want to sound pushy because nobody should be pushed to review. So, thanks tons!Baby, Seasons Change But People Don't.
(#) aloneinacrowdedroom 2007-09-30
wow... your writing is awesome... i almost had to get out my SAT vocab book ;) seriously though your writing is gorgeous and i wish i could write like that!!
and i love this story and i can't wait for more!!
love
miss~eliza~bethAuthor's response
Thank you so much. I'm glad you enjoy the story so far. Your review was sincerely appreciated. =DBaby, Seasons Change But People Don't.
(#) RebeccaRambunctious 2007-09-30
ahh i loved this
your writing is amazing.
please update soon!Author's response
Thank you. =D
Your review made me smile =))))))Baby, Seasons Change But People Don't.
(#) mooniexmisfit 2007-10-02
B-E-A- utiful. I kinda giggled at patricks mom pinching saffy's cheek. I did that to my friend today, only her mouth was full of gatorade. It kind of went everywhere, then I laughed until I snorted.
ANYWAYS, BRAVO!
Author's response
LOL! Must've been super messy.
Thanks for teh review. Certainly made me smile =DBaby, Seasons Change But People Don't.
(#) 2ndBestKiller 2007-10-03
Aww. Just picturing wee little Patrick makes me smile. I wonder if he wore the hat. Anywhoo - excellent writing.
And no, you're not being pushy at all. You deserve reviews. :)
**Chelsea DaggerAuthor's response
Awe, thank you!Baby, Seasons Change But People Don't.
(#) jessiexnikki 2007-11-19
wow, your writing is simply awesome. I love the way you make words fit together, analogies and the metaphors you use really work!
the only thing i geuss you could work on is being a little more concise with some stuff. Sometimes it just seems more powerful that way, but thats totally my opinion. you had this one line that went something like "backing my car out of the driveway, leaving the house tired and empty, like me." idk why but i liked it. sorry if i seem like a major ass for critiquing this at all, especially for my first review but i just wanna help. i normally dont get like this, maybe its cause this is the internet. lol
ok well you have an amazing vocabulary and im really digging your work!Author's response
You aren't an ass for critiquing. I mean, I did ask for a critique, comment, or compliment, and you gave me all three! (I think?)
---Am glad you enjoyed my story. And I'm glad you liked it enough to review. Thanks tons =DDD
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