- I like the first one better, no offense or anything but you did ask for opinions! Yeah anyway, I did, I liekd at a lot more because it was easier to read.
Author's responseDON'T SAY NO OFFENSE!!!! Dude, sheesh, if i couldnt' handle the comments then I'd be screwed wouldn't i? :P hugs
(#) x_Charlie_x 2007-10-02haha well.... i prefer version one... but that's no surprise really.
i just think it makes your story stand out and like you said it before it gives you more flexibility
but what ever... tiz you're story
great update by the way!
i was grinning too when Mikey turned up
Author's responseVersion one! Yay! (lol)
(#) tragicWithACapital_T 2007-10-02both were great
i'm sorry about before though haha, it's not like you ever surprised us, you had the lines. i'll conform and pick 1, completely up to you and yea :)
oh, and i liked this: "lackadaisically"
heehee, funn use of language =)
Author's responseWhy are you sorry? If everyone just went yeah I like ths story update, how boring would that be?
I would normally say never conform! but cause I like version one I'll say good choice!
Yeah I like that word.
pleas please, make the next one soon, i'm hanging on the very edge of my seat!
you are such an amazing writer, and
i'm loving this story so much!
make the next update soon, please?
Author's responseDude! Someone else who says dude! ahem Sorry.
The next one was all ready to be published but then I forgot to email the first part of Chapter four home, so I couldn't post. :( Tis posted now though.
Thankyou and thankyou
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