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- Just Another Chicago Girl- (#) fallout_uk 2007-10-08I am sorry but this story is terrible. I am not trying to be a bitch but everything is insanly far fetched and in no order.
 Even if it turns out to be a dream it isn't well written. Maybe try not to write it as a script- Author's responseHey I can dream can't I nd it's easier for people to read in script form. Trust me. I no people who like it that way. But It's your opinion so i'm cool with it.
- Just Another Chicago Girl- (#) petewentzforever14 2007-10-08Hey I no i'm not the best writer in the world. So this my first shot at a story and I hope its good.
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