(#) full_pensieve 2007-10-30This fic is absolutely hilarious! At last, someone else saw the Ron Weasley/Ron Stoppable connection - LOL. I'm also partial to the Ron Weasley/Shaggy connection, myself. ;-) I've read through all of your fics posted at Ficwad, and I like your sense of humor quite a lot.
My only peeve, and it's a minor one, is the significant repetition at the beginning of each chapter. Your chapters are short enough that I think the lead-in is unnecessary. As with all opinions, your mileage may vary.
Good luck with your writing!
Mike [Full Pensieve]
Author's responseShaggy and Scooby might make an appearance in the chapter I'm currently working on... I thought of a twist I don't think anyone will expect...
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