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5 reviewsThe Semiclassic 'everyone has been lying to Harry about everything' plot. Very AU. Bashing of pretty much everyone. Mind Control Sex. Language. Dumbledore decides the Old Families won't tolerate th...
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The Acts Of Betrayal
(#) Cateagle 2007-10-21
-chuckle- Trust Luna to be a helping and valuable friend. I wonder how many others they have that'll be showing up. OTOH, Tonks has firmly placed herself in the "Enemy-Dumble's Stooge" camp and I loved Harry's approach to getting her out of his way; he really understands the Goblins better than he thinks. His dealings with the Bank Manager certainly show a basic respect and a reasonable amount of understanding and I especially loved the "incentive fee" for the finder teams; I rather suspect that's going to leave some -very- unhappy individuals.
The bit with Hermione and her parents was good, their, and his, determination to protect her conflicting with her desire to be with and protect him; she's determined enough, we know how that's going to end.Author's response
I'm working on some of the repo scenes now. Molly is going to be especially upset...
In another fic I have Harry asking himself if he has ever won an arguement with Hermione...The Acts Of Betrayal
(#) Rocky235 2007-11-03
I forgot about Tonks being marked. Too bad for her, Ha!
Thank you for sharing your work with us.The Acts Of Betrayal
(#) GBTtown 2012-06-20
You have written a couple of the best HP fanfic out there. I have read this story once or twice before and, if I remember correctly, have never commented. I absolutely hate the way you repeat the dialogue! Sorry, it takes a good story and makes it awful to read. I also notice the "GIANT" spacing used between sentences and paragraphs. Truth told this story actually only contains half the number of chapters credited. Shame on you!
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