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The Undergdogs
3 reviews'We are the outcasts. We are the broken. We are the helpless. We are the misfits.' First poem on here. Don't eat me.
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The Undergdogs
(#) Silvana 2007-10-23
You need to proof it, but that's really good.
I am a freak, geek and nerd
A history boff and music whore
An invisible kid and a wild child
One of the ones pushed aside.
Author's response
hehe wow if that was a response to my poem then that was awsome =D lol
i read it through n changed the noticable errors... let me know if i missed any?The Undergdogs
(#) Silvana 2007-10-28
Yeah that was a response. :P
Just one error: We’re the ones who get sick to much.
The to should be too...I think.
Still an awesome fic.Author's response
ahhhh yeah thank you! =)
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