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"You Looked Like You Needed Some Help, So That's What I Thought I'd Do."
3 reviewsJust a little blurb that ran through my head, I thought I'd post it and see what people thought of it. Tomo/OFC.
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"You Looked Like You Needed Some Help, So That's What I Thought I'd Do."
(#) x__Doctor-Freak__x 2007-11-07
All This Needs Is A Little More Description And It'll Be Perfect. Nice Idea And Pretty Well Written. If You Ask Someone To Beta It They May Be Able To Make A Few Suggestions.Author's response
Thank you, I'm glad you like it considering it took me all of twenty minutes to type it up. Would you mind beta-ing it for me?
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