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A memorial mishap, a teleological transformation and the hazard of helping hands. Oh yeah. Smut, too.
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Harry Potter and the Midnight Sun.
(#) pfeil 2007-10-27
Your UTF-8 comes through fine here. It's nice to get the translations. Are there any other wardens? I don't think he needs many (any?) more consorts though, since once you pass a certain point it does get a bit excessive. (I've seen a few stories with hundreds of bonded where they need schedules, which just seems weird.)
I'm really enjoying this; It fits with a number of my favourite characterizations and such.
I've always found Ron useless, so getting rid of him is nice, especially as you managed it without overdong it and making him be completely evil and love potioning/spying/stealing like some do.
Dumbledore has to be at least manipulative, as I find the evidence overwhelming. I do like the misguided version you use (like Jeconais's in WKGQ) more than the "next dark lord" or "kill him and take the credit and Hogwarts" versions I've also seen.
Letting the Huldr retract their tails is interesting; I'm wondering where you'll take it. Similarly with the girls. The veela presence is an interesting explanation, since I suppose they were a bit OOC. (Not that I expect anyone minded ;] )
Oh, and I went and used up my rating points for the week for you. Hopefully it'll help. I'm not used to ficwad, so hadn't done it.
And last but not least, you used "teleological"! I always like using it. It's great for confusing people, and is useful, but I don't recall ever seeing it more than a handful of times before. (Yes, I'm a bit strange :P)Author's response
I think i just read one of those insane harem fics, where he ends up with everybody and their mothers. I don't think I'll add any more to this little family (putting the FUN in dysfunctional) for now, at least.
Ron just had to go. He's insanely difficult to write as something more than filler, and i wanted to write that piece in Gringott's.
Ol' Fumbledore has to be quite demented in Canon too, right?
Imagine an off-colour comment in front of a few pretty girls, who suddenly sprouts tails, fangs and claws. Now imagine a slimy blonde wig on top of the resulting pile. I have too many ideas...
Thanx
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(#) PuckSilverbreeze 2007-10-27
Please continue this. I love how you are working this out. I agree DD is nuts.. You should probably keep the harem small... Though I wouldn't mind Harry owning Cissa or Bella... Exspecially Bella... I keep feeling she isn't in control of herself... Nobody is that crazy or evilHarry Potter and the Midnight Sun.
(#) slickrcbd 2007-10-27
I only discovered this story earlier this week when I clicked on the wrong line when checking for updates. I'm glad I did.
As far as ratings go, when the admins managed to restore the ratings points, I tried to rate this story, but it didn't seem to have any effect on the ratings. I think the system is still broken, or at least buggy. I'll try again on Sunday IF they reset.Harry Potter and the Midnight Sun.
(#) hptrump 2007-10-28
Good chapter. Hope Harry changes his mind and bonds the Ginny, Luna and Hermoine. Seven females would make for the strongest grouping. Looking forward for the next chapter.Harry Potter and the Midnight Sun.
(#) jabarber69 2007-10-28
You want me to rate this story, well I look for every day hoping for an update knowing full well that you probably want update until the weekend, but hey I love it so much what can I say. I do hope he takes as consorts hermione, ginny and luna, since he can morph his cock he can shrink it down to where it wont hurt the girls.Author's response
Thanks.
Well, you and I know about this morphing, he hasn't figured it out yet. Imagine when he does. Actually, I'm writing about him using it right this minute, but the shrinking feature won't show up for a while. I'm planning to have fun with it.
I'm getting faster at typing, which is my major roadblock, and i will have to make the chapters shorter, so the updates will be more frequent ahead. Thanks for reviewing.
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(#) DrT 2007-10-28
An interesting chapter. I had wondered how nuts Dumbles would be, and you answered that! And I agree, 8 is more than enough to keep track of, if you're adding Tonks as well. 6 wasn't easy in one of my stories.
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Thanks. I thought i'd try for a Dumbles you could feel sorry for. Let's see how it goes.
I'm still undecided as to how large i shall make the family. I can do like you have, and make a political point, or like Selector, and bond everything that moves, their mothers and all their bridge-playing friends. Or i could stick with what my plot needs at this time, and settle for the current crew. Adding girls just to add them only complicates things. Ah well. We'll see.
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(#) koppe 2007-10-28
A hot and original story, please update soon.
It was interesting about Dumbledore... Did anybody else (than Harry) understood what his ramblings were about? How fast is he slipping? How much damage will he manage to do?
Has Harry underestimated the publics -- and friends/classmates -- reaction to his death?
I really hope harry reconciders, and decides to bond -- or at least have some formalized relationship -- with Hermione, Ginny and Luna -- and maybe Tonks... perhaps he can resize himself when necessery? How would their parents (especially Hermione's) react to their daughters being part of a harem?
I also hope that Harry will soon provide Gabrielle's child with some half-siblings...
I'm looking forward to Harry and Gabrielle's "wedding".
What will happen to Ron? Will Molly blame Harry for her sons problems? Even if he gets well, how will Ron react to Harry's new powers and relationships?
Keep up the great work.
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(#) Jearom 2007-10-28
Check it out! An original and well written Harem!Super!Harry fic! I agree with your responses to the harem size ideas. Adding Luna, Hermione, Ginny, and Tonks would put the harem at the largest most manageable size I think. If Cissy and Bella are taken as slaves, Harry should morph them into House Elves and give them to Dobby.
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(#) lycus 2007-10-28
I really really love this story, and I hope that you change your mind and have hermione,luna,tonks and ginny because the girls love harry and gabrielle was watching them for a while and I think that she would have liked to join them and as far as tonks goes like stina she can morph but she most likely is more kinky, and as for the other girls harry must have forgotten that he can morph too even then if he releases too much power while hs's near them he will bind their magic to him and gabrielle gets more sisters we all win and if anyone needs a harem that size it's harry one woman for every bad year before hogwarts looking foward to the next chapter.
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