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• Harry Potter and the Midnight Sun.

  (#) whatareyouevensaying 2007-10-28

  Another really good update. I'm interested to see how the Hogwarts girls will like Harry thinking he's too big for them.

• Harry Potter and the Midnight Sun.

  (#) Cateagle 2007-10-28

  Now that was a wickedly good chapter (and, yes, I've left ratings). I thought the poetry was a nice touch.
  
  The new tools he received were excellent ones and I love the new form(s) he has. How many does he have? He's clearly got a dragon form but it sounded like he has others, too.
  
  The funeral/wake/whatever was most certainly educational for him and the young ladies, though I don't think Dumbles planned to give away nearly as much as he did. Methinks he is going to have a rather wretched time trying to control Harry once he returns.
  
  chuckle I still think Harry should say it was a "prank" planned by his mother, on advice from a seer she trusted, to give him the opportunity to learn to use the present she left him.
  
  It sounds like he's got quite the nice castle, now. I wonder just how often he'll actually sleep in Hogwarts with a base like that near and the gals waiting for him. I don't think I'd spend too many nights in Hogwarts.
  
  That was some delightful smut, too. He obviously is going to have difficulty giving that up when he returns to Hogwarts. As to the status of the three humans, I'm in favor of "full disclosure", let 'em see just what the equipment is and let 'em decide if they want to try/risk it. Then again, they do seem like a right randy bunch (best kind) and likely would try him anyway.

• Harry Potter and the Midnight Sun.

  (#) LordSeagen 2007-10-29

  I just love your story. Harry's domination was a little surprizing but it works. Can't wait for the next chapter.

• Harry Potter and the Midnight Sun.

  (#) GryffindorDragon 2007-10-29

  This is interesting. At times it seems to move a bit slow. You seem to be of two minds about the "human girls", with Gabi pushing Harry towards them but Harry saying repeatedly that he won't bond them (once that he's too big -- what happened to his morphing ability???). Personally, while you've "created" some neat consorts for Harry, I would really much, much rather see him "married" to Ginny, Hermione, and Luna (not necessarily in that order) and Tonks as well. Let the OCs be his consorts (or even mistresses, by your levels in ch. 3) and upgrade the real characters to wives. Perhaps, you're already planning something like that, and Harry's reticence is just a plot device. I hope so.

  Author's response

  Thanks, but I'm afraid I'll disappoint you. Gabrielle has opinions, but she calls Harry Master for a reason. His morphing? He hasn't thought about it yet. I would gladly have used Canon characters, but Rowling only gave me Mme Maxime, Winky and Maris, the merfolk chieftainess to work with, and they don't work for me at all. If I upgrade the human girls and downgrade the part- or nonhumans,
  I'll be killing my story. There's plenty of Harry/Multi fics out there. Good luck, and thanks for the review.

• Harry Potter and the Midnight Sun.

  (#) TxA_GunFighter 2008-03-29

  Good chapter. I love the length of your chapters. Hate short ones.
  
  gunny

• Harry Potter and the Midnight Sun.

  (#) Dragen 2008-07-21

  Another great chapter mate, loving the story, thought I am wondering if you’re going to add Hermione, Ginny and Luna into the harem, if so how. After reading ‘And whether pigs have wings’ and this chapter it looks like Harry isn’t going after them, as they were human and couldn’t handle he now. Maybe you could have Tonks has his lover, seeing that she can adapt to his size. :P I do like Harry’s ‘memorial’ very nice. Could you email me with what is going to happen with them, are they going to be in the harem or not, as I would like to know. You’ve got my email address.

  Author's response

  Why not just jump ahead? Chapter 31 is out to Beta right now, so the story's pretty much laid out and everybody changes.
  Vanir

• Harry Potter and the Midnight Sun.

  (#) vampireex 2011-12-17

  Well I'm not really of a person that is good with reviewing so I will just say that I quite like this story even if sometimes I'm quite confused but otherwise I ♥ it

• Harry Potter and the Midnight Sun.

  (#) Daeda1us 2014-10-16

  Yeah, I would love to rate your story, but you are already maxed out!
  Wonderful tale of sex and harry potter.
  Well Done!
  

• Harry Potter and the Midnight Sun.

  (#) Bronze 2015-09-07

  I most certainly agree. Camelot 3000 was a good comic to read for as long as it lasted. I still have every issue I ever bought. I also agree with others here about Ron being useless and am glad to see him gone. The night of Harry's return to school should be most interesting for those three young ladies. Though unless Harry can shrink his dick, there's no way they'll get what they want from him. I'm not the least bit surprised by Dumbles being senile. He's either senile or manipulative in every story. Including cannon! I truly wish I could give this story another positive rating but it can't go any higher then a 5. Myself, I'd push it as high as I could!

• Harry Potter and the Midnight Sun.

  (#) Staryfury0901 2021-11-28

  Have to stand by what I posted in 2015. If I could I would push this higher. I've since decided that instead of calling the old fraud Dumbles I'll call him Fumblemort. Simply because he totally fumbles all his dealings with Harry and he's even more of a Dark Lord then Voldemort is! Voldemort will torture but he'll usually kill you fairly quickly. Fumblemort on the other hand will just keep torturing you till he finally has no further use for you. I'm convinced he deliberately allowed the Potter family to be killed and the Longbottoms tortured into insanity as it fit his plans. Though, I've read other stories that state it was because both families wouldn't follow his rule of not killing the Death Eaters during fights. They became expendable because of it. The same applies to Molly's brothers. Fumblemort wanted the Death Eaters to live as they were from the old families. Meaning very Ancient magic that he didn't want to die out. Though, in those stories it's never stated nor hinted at whether or not the Potter or Longbottom families fell into the same category.
  One of the things in HP stories that really bothers me is that McGonagall never bothers to stay with Harry whenever he goes to Fumblemorts' office. She's his Head Of House but never acts on that duty to him. But Snape's always there even though Harry not in his House. And the worst part is that NO ONE on the staff stands up for Harry! I really don't see why he never went to Gringotts to check on his vault(s) or if his parent had a WILL. Especially after fourth year! Give his fat, greedy uncle a couple of gold coins to drop him at the Leaky Caldron and go to the bank. But then Harry wouldn't be the doormat that JKR wrote him as if he did.

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