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Chapter 4 - Happy Birthday Potter
3 reviewsThe next day brings Harry's Birthday. Tracey is finding it hard not to fall in love with the Golden Boy after sleeping one night with him.
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Harry Potter and the Army of Ages
(#) redquail3 2007-11-07
I find that this story to be surprisingly good. For a Harry Potter story to not be focused upon his point of view focused upon him is a suprise and very refreshing. One of the things that most impressed me is that I can think of no way to improve upon what you have already written, so keep up the very good work.Harry Potter and the Army of Ages
(#) sweetgirl 2007-11-07
I find myself really liking your story. I like how Tracey didn't fall for him rught away. Are we going to find out how exactly Hermione and the Weasleys betrayed Harry? Can't wait for more Harry and TRacey action. Keep up the great work.Harry Potter and the Army of Ages
(#) thedon1023 2007-11-07
come on you know you want to write a lemon and need i remind you an R rated work would feature strong inferenses of sexual behavior its only in the Nc 17 fics that usually have full blown x rated scenes. but you should write a lemon for this fic, come onnnnnnn....you know you want to. THE POWER OF PERVERSION COMPELS YOU!!! THE POWER OF PERVERSION COMPELS YOU!!! THE POWER OF PERVERSION COMPELS YOU!!!Author's response
ROFL Well at least I know I got one person sitting around waiting for the lemon chapter I might...or might not write. But let me remind you their still getting to know each other. Plus Harry is too damn noble to know he could get laid. But something close enough to be a lemon fix might be within the next ten chapters. Maybe. :-PHarry Potter and the Army of Ages
(#) Cateagle 2007-11-07
Heh, it's been quite a hectic couple days for Tracey as all her preconceived notions about Harry have been stood on end; it's a wonder she hasn't gotten a whiplash from the paradigm shift.
The Order meeting was more amusing than anything else as it appears they've yet to realize just how the power is shifting and just -who- set this shift up. I suspect Dumbles is foing to find himself flummoxed when he does find out how far back these preparations go.
I did like Fleur's support of Harry and it'll be interesting to watch Bill try and work back into her graces for Dumbles. Somehow, I don't think he's going to have much success until he starts seeing reality, not Dumbles' imitation thereof.
I reckon the opportunity for a lemon will occur between the "now" in story time and the wedding, or at least on the wedding night. ;) I reckon that she's going to be surprised on that count, too.
Finally, I do have to ask if the objection to some of the Weaseleys and Hermione is something they've done, possibly at Dumbles' direction or something else?Harry Potter and the Army of Ages
(#) Cateagle 2007-11-07
PS. It'll be "interesting" to see what plans Dumbles has for Harry that require his full control of him like that. I don't trust him on this.Harry Potter and the Army of Ages
(#) jabarber69 2007-11-08
Love the little romance thngy building up with Tracey and the always clueless Harry Potter!
Hell I'm a guy, in my late 40's and I'm still clueless sometimes about women!Author's response
Aren't we all.Harry Potter and the Army of Ages
(#) NacNud 2007-11-08
Like the story so far. Should be interesting to see where you go with it. Keep up the good work.
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