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• The Bulldog and the Archer

  (#) elissandranne 2007-11-13

  Two months and Charlie still thinks of her? Are you sure he's a man? (Joking!)
  
  I can see you're taking your time with those two, not rushing things, and it's better that way, of course. It's obvious Charlie is attracted to May, and he's intrigued too. Good combination.
  
  I like May. And the way you're developing her. You're characterizing her through her actions, her words, her belongings... rather than writing a long descriptive paragraph detailing every aspect of her. And I like it better that way. I know lots of people like the long descriptions, but I tend to skip parts of them, whereas I remember the details when they are parts of the story and flow with the rest. Am I making any sense? lol.
  
  Your take on the life of Dragon Wardens is definitely interesting!
  
  -Anne

• The Bulldog and the Archer

  (#) White_Dragon 2007-11-14

  Feels better to not rush them!
  
  I'm glad you like Mayumi. Yes, of course you are making sense!
  
  Somebody had to make sense of them! After all, you can't keep all of those Dragons in a pen. And to have Muggles know about the Dragons? lol Seriously, they would have to have a lot of duties to keep that place going.
  
  Thanks again, Anne!
  
  --Jim

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